Talk:KVEA/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs) 21:05, 14 July 2021 (UTC)

• Move the short description to the top of the article.
• Also move "Use mdy dates" below both hatnotes per MOS:ORDER.
• Add a MOS:GEOCOMMA after "Corona, California, United States".
• Add serial commas after "Philadelphia (WKBS-TV)" and "travelogues".
• "in order to" → "to" (less wordy)
• Sort categories in alphabetical order.

• @Some Dude From North Carolina: Done. Also expanded the lede. Sammi Brie (she/her • t • c) 15:41, 16 July 2021 (UTC)

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
It is reasonably well written. a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists): It is factually accurate and verifiable. a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism): It is broad in its coverage. a (major aspects): b (focused): It follows the neutral point of view policy. Fair representation without bias: It is stable. No edit wars, etc.: It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate. a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Overall: Pass/Fail:
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