Talk:KDAF/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs) 12:00, 23 July 2021 (UTC)

• Move the short description to the top of the article (MOS:ORDER).
• Add WP:ALT text to every image being used.
• Add a WP:GEOCOMMA after "Dallas, Texas, United States".
• Add a serial comma between "KTXA, KXTX-TV and KTVT".
• Add a serial comma between "movies, reruns and children's programs".
• Add a WP:GEOCOMMA after "Washington, D.C.".
• Add a serial comma between "ABC, CBS and NBC".
• Add a comma after "KSTW in Seattle".
• "as part the" – reword
• "reviously" – typo?

• Yup.

• Add a serial comma between "editors, producers and photographers".
• "5pm" → "5 pm" (MOS:TIME)
• Add a serial comma between "lifestyle, entertainment and opinion segments".
• Be consistent with "a.m.", "am", "p.m.", and "pm".

• The general formatting script is awful about this! It doesn't pick up all of them.

• "cancelled" → "canceled" (American English)
• Wikilink Aljean Harmetz.
• Use "last name, first name" for every reference.
• The Bill Carter article is not about the reporter so remove the link.
• MikeMcGuff.com has been found to be unreliable.
• Mark references from The New York Times with "|url-access=limited".
• Mark references from The Wall Street Journal with "|url-access=subscription".
• Ping when done. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 15:25, 23 July 2021 (UTC)

• @Some Dude From North Carolina: Done. This was a weird one for me—a lot of existing prose (and some existing references with subpar material), some of which I'd written previously, but also massive trimming. The article was cut down by 40% of its prose size in preparation for GA. I axed one of the old logos, which came from Logopedia (ruh-roh). Sammi Brie (she/her • t • c) 16:10, 23 July 2021 (UTC)