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GA Review

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Reviewer: Sammi Brie (talk · contribs) 02:41, 30 January 2022 (UTC)[reply]


GA review
(see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose, spelling, and grammar):
    b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a (references):
    b (citations to reliable sources):
    c (OR):
    d (copyvio and plagiarism):
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects):
    b (focused):
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars, etc.:
  6. It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales):
    b (appropriate use with suitable captions):

Overall:
Pass/Fail:

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Copy changes

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Lead

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  • Change "whom" to "which"
    • Done.

Early life

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  • Does (MLB) need to be included if it is not to be mentioned again in the page? The other acronym recitations make sense, as they are repeated later.
    • It does not, good catch.

Playing career

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  • Remove comma after "team rules"
    • Done and moved ref to the end of the sentence.
  • Remove comma after "7 seconds of ice time per game"
    • Done.

International play

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  • "Miller has represented" — likely should be past tense
    • Done.

Personal life

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  • Remove comma after "throughout his hockey career"
    • Done.

Awards and honours

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  • It would be more appropriate in this case to use American English for the header.
    • Whoops, you're right!

Other items

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  • Earwig catches organization names and recitations of stats, e.g. three goals and 14 assists for 17 points. Not a major issue.
  • The lone image on the page is freely licensed, though it is missing a |alt= tag.
    • Only part of the FA criteria, but added anyway. I am admittedly not great at alt text.
  • References are archived.
  • No BLP violations.

Summary

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@GhostRiver: Just needs a few copy changes, the type that fresh eyes after nearly two months can catch. Putting on hold; ping when revised. Sammi Brie (she/her • tc) 02:54, 30 January 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Sammi Brie Changes addressed, thank you! — GhostRiver 03:14, 30 January 2022 (UTC)[reply]