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NPOV

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A few edits such as this and this have fundamentally damaged this article by violating NPOV. We can't use anyone's official bio! The whole text is blatantly promotional, and I think we may need to roll it back to January 2015 to repair. Magic9Ball (talk) 14:40, 15 September 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Edit request to reflect new position

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Hi, I work for Microsoft. I would like to request that the first paragraph be updated to reflect her current position at Microsoft.

Please delete , currently co-head of Hogan Lovells' Privacy and Cybersecurity practice, and insert is an American lawyer who.

After "March 31, 2016" please insert , where she focused on protecting consumers’ privacy, guarding consumers from financial fraud, and maintaining competition in industries involving health care and high-tech.[1] She is currently Corporate Vice President and Deputy General Counsel for Privacy and Regulatory Affairs at Microsoft.[2].

If prefer to replace entire paragraph:

Julie Brill is an American lawyer who served as a Commissioner of the Federal Trade Commission (FTC) from April 6, 2010 to March 31, 2016, where she focused on protecting consumers’ privacy, guarding consumers from financial fraud, and maintaining competition in industries involving health care and high-tech.[3] She is currently Corporate Vice President and Deputy General Counsel for Privacy and Regulatory Affairs at Microsoft.[4]

Thank you for your consideration, TechSeaSpokes2004 (talk) 18:33, 7 June 2019 (UTC)[reply]

References

  1. ^ "Profile: FTC's Brill emerges as key player in national, international regulation" (PDF). FTC. MLex. Retrieved 7 June 2019.
  2. ^ "Microsoft hires former FTC figure for new privacy role". TechCrunch. Retrieved 7 June 2019.
  3. ^ "Profile: FTC's Brill emerges as key player in national, international regulation" (PDF). FTC. MLex. Retrieved 7 June 2019.
  4. ^ "Microsoft hires former FTC figure for new privacy role". TechCrunch. Retrieved 7 June 2019.

Reply 09-JUN-2019

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  Edit request declined  

  • The requested description of the subject is placed using Wikipedia's voice (e.g., "where she focused on protecting consumers’ privacy, guarding consumers from financial fraud.." etc.) Descriptions of the subject ought to include specific actions rather than non-specific descriptions ("guarding consumers").

Regards,  Spintendo  08:21, 9 June 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Edit request to reflect new position - UPDATED

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Thank you for your feedback. I have added more specific examples to address User:Spintendo's concerns.

Updated request, with more specific examples:

Julie Brill is an American lawyer who served as a Commissioner of the Federal Trade Commission (FTC) from April 6, 2010 to March 31, 2016. While at the FTC, she focused on protecting consumers’ privacy by developing five core components for effective data security practices[1] and encouraging data brokers to develop a Web-based portal for consumers to view data collected on them,[2] guarding consumers from financial fraud by appearing before Congress to explain deceptive practices in the financial services industry,[3] and maintaining competition in industries involving health care and high-tech by blocking a health care network’s purchase of a local hospital, opposing a pharmacy benefit manager's purchase of a competitor, and finding a search engine’s online advertising policies anticompetitive in 2013.[4] She is currently Corporate Vice President and Deputy General Counsel for Privacy and Regulatory Affairs at Microsoft.[5]

Another option would be to update the first sentence, and add the last sentence:

Julie Brill is an American lawyer who served as a Commissioner of the Federal Trade Commission (FTC) from April 6, 2010 to March 31, 2016. She is currently Corporate Vice President and Deputy General Counsel for Privacy and Regulatory Affairs at Microsoft.[6]

I made the simpler change to the page but a Wikipedia editor friend informed me I should let an editor without a conflict of interest make that change, so I reverted it and now offer my suggestion in talk. Thank you in advance for your consideration. TechSeaSpokes2004 (talk) 21:23, 13 June 2019 (UTC)[reply]

References

  1. ^ Harrison, Erin E. "The Privacy Puzzle". Inside Counsel. Inside Counsel. Retrieved 10 June 2019.
  2. ^ Bachman, Katy. "The Hawks and Doves of Washington's Privacy Debate". AdWeek. Retrieved 10 June 2019.
  3. ^ Bartz, Diane. "Debt settlement firms rife with fraud--GAO". Reuters. Reuters. Retrieved 10 June 2019.
  4. ^ Swift, Mike. "Profile: FTC's Brill emerges as key player in national, international regulation" (PDF). FTC. MLex. Retrieved 10 June 2019.
  5. ^ Hatmaker, Taylor. "Microsoft hires former FTC figure for new privacy role". TechCrunch. TechCrunch. Retrieved 10 June 2019.
  6. ^ Hatmaker, Taylor. "Microsoft hires former FTC figure for new privacy role". TechCrunch. TechCrunch. Retrieved 10 June 2019.

Reply 13-JUN-2019

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  Edit request implemented  

  • The second suggested lead statements "Another option would be to update the first sentence, and add the last sentence" were added to the article's lead statement area.

plus Additional changes made:

  1. All instances of referring to the subject as "Former commissioner Brill" were changed to "Brill".
  2. In depth mentions of the subject's advocacy of favored consumer protection strategies were limited.
  3. Two When? inline templates were appended to sections of text where the time frame was unclear.
  4. Unreferenced text was omitted.
  5. The POV maintenance template dated from 2017 was deleted.

Regards,  Spintendo  02:32, 14 June 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Edit request to fix [when?] specification

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I work for Microsoft, so I have a conflict of interest.

Information to be removed:

Brill received the New York University School of Law Alumna of the Year Award,[when?][13] and was elected to the American Law Institute.[when?][14]

Information to be added:

Brill received the New York University School of Law Alumna of the Year Award in 2014,[1] the International Association of Privacy Professionals Privacy Leadership Award in 2014, [2] and was elected to the American Law Institute in 2013.[3]

Reason: To address the two inline when? templates appended to this section of text

Additional changes: I also added one other privacy-related recognition, improved the link to the American Law Institute appointment, and linked to the Wikipedia pages of the corresponding institutions.

Hope this helps improve the page. Thank you. TechSeaSpokes2004 (talk) 23:41, 6 September 2019 (UTC)[reply]

References

  1. ^ "Milbank Tweed Forum features a conversation with FTC Commissioner Julie Brill '85". NYU Law. NYU Law News. Retrieved 6 September 2019.
  2. ^ "FTC Commissioner Julie Brill Honored with International Association of Privacy Professionals 2014 Privacy Leadership Award". IAPP. IAPP. Retrieved 6 September 2019.
  3. ^ "The American Law Institute Elects 69 New Members". The American Law Institute. The American Law Institute. Retrieved 6 September 2019.

Reply 06-SEP-2019

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  Edit request implemented    Spintendo  03:25, 7 September 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Edit request to change image in infobox

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Hi, I (still) work for Microsoft, which Julie Brill now works for. She would like to replace the image used in this article with the more recent one we uploaded at https://commons.wikimedia.org/wiki/File:Julie_Brill,_Chief_Privacy_Officer_for_Microsoft.jpg Thank you. TechSeaSpokes2004 (talk) 18:36, 13 September 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Reply 13-SEP-2019

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  Awaiting OTRS approval  

Regards,  Spintendo  02:22, 14 September 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Reply 25-SEP-2019

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User:Spintendo Approval from Wikipedia's Open-source Ticket Request System has been received for this file: https://commons.wikimedia.org/wiki/File:Julie_Brill,_Chief_Privacy_Officer_for_Microsoft.jpg

Thank you!--TechSeaSpokes2004 (talk) 21:56, 25 September 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Reply 25-SEP-2019

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  Edit request implemented    Spintendo  01:09, 26 September 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Additional source materials to be added to address the need for further citations

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Hi there, I work for Microsoft. I have some additional source materials for the content to be added to address the need for further citations.

Proposed changes:

Edit request

Information to be added: [1] [2] Explanation of issue: Additional citations needed for statement, where she studied under a Root-Tilden Scholarship.


Information to be added: [3] Explanation of issue: Additional citations needed for statement: Brill received the New York University School of Law Alumna of the Year Award in 2014.”


Information to be added: [4]

Explanation of issue: Additional citations needed for statements: “Brill wrote the Commission’s unanimous decision in ProMedica dissolving the merger of two hospitals in Toledo, Ohio. Brill’s ProMedica decision was upheld on appeal by Sixth Circuit of the United States Circuit Court.”

TechSeaSpokes2004 (talk) 22:50, 3 January 2020 (UTC)[reply]

This is the same person from Microsoft with some additional requests. I also have some requested additions for content, with the necessary source materials.

Information to be changed: Delete Brill is an advocate for consumer privacy,” and replace with “While at the FTC, Brill also focused on privacy implications of emerging technologies, including how personal data is gathered and used, and its effect on consumer privacy.” Citations: [5] [6] [7] [8] [9] [10]> [11] [12] [13] [14] Explanation of issue: Additional citations needed for statement, expand to include more about her involvement.

Information to be added: “Brill served as assistant attorney general for consumer protection and antitrust for the state of Vermont from 1988 – 2008. As a Vermont assistant attorney general in 1991, Brill and her staff discovered that 3,000 Vermont residents were identified as having tax liens against them by a consumer credit reporting agency. Brill testified in front of Congress about the ways in which credit reporting agencies were hurting consumers, which contributed to the 1996 revisions to the Fair Credit Reporting Act, the first substantial revisions in 25 years.” Information to be added: [15] [16] [17] [18] Explanation of issue: More relevant information about her background in consumer protection and notable moments during her time as assistant attorney general of Vermont with historical impact.

Information to be added: “While serving at the state level, Brill also worked to coordinate with other states as co-chair of the Privacy Working Group at the National Association of Attorneys General.” Citation: [19] [20] Explanation of issue: More relevant information about her background in consumer protection and notable moments during her time as assistant attorney general of Vermont with historical impact.

Information to be added: “Brill was nominated by President Barack Obama to serve as a Commissioner on the U.S. Federal Trade Commission in 2009. Her nomination was confirmed unanimously by the U.S. Senate on March 3, 2010 and she was sworn in on April 6, 2010.” References supporting change: Cite error: A <ref> tag is missing the closing </ref> (see the help page). Explanation of issue: More relevant information about her background in consumer protection and notable moments during her time as FTC Commissioner.

Information to be added: “Brill also took action against a wide range of tech companies for failing to secure personal data properly, calling for more protections for consumers regarding the inappropriate use of data behind the scenes.” Citations: [21] [22] Explanation of issue: More relevant information about her background in consumer protection and notable moments during her time as FTC Commissioner.

Information to be added: “Brill supported the development of a “do not track” feature to allow Internet users to tell websites to stop tracking their online activities and collecting information about them.” Citations: [23] Explanation of issue: More relevant information about her background in consumer protection and notable moments during her time as FTC Commissioner.

Information to be added: “While at the FTC, Brill created the “Reclaim Your Name” project designed to encourage more transparency within the data broker industry. She appeared on CBS 60 Minutes in 2014 to discuss the data broker industry and what needs to change to provide more control and information for consumers.” Citations: [24] [25] Explanation of issue: More relevant information about her background in consumer protection and notable moments during her time as FTC Commissioner.

References

  1. ^ Rodriguez, Gina. "Tending the Roots". Issuu. NYU Law Magazine. p. 29. Retrieved 3 December 2019.
  2. ^ Dewey, Katrina (2017). "The Law School Road Trip". LawDragon (18): 30. Retrieved 3 December 2019.
  3. ^ Fredman, Catherine. "Consumer Guardian". Issuu. NYU Law Magazine. p. 40. Retrieved 3 December 2019.
  4. ^ Swift, Mike (June 10, 2014). "Profile: FTC's Brill emerges as key player in national, international regulation" (PDF). MLex. Retrieved 27 December 2019.
  5. ^ Fredman, Catherine. "Consumer Guardian". Issuu. NYU Law Magazine. p. 40. Retrieved 3 December 2019.
  6. ^ "North Carolina Law Review Hosts Annual Symposium "Social Networks and the Law"". Issuu. Carolina Law. p. 3. Retrieved 12 December 2019.
  7. ^ [ttps://issuu.com/nyulaw/docs/2012mag "Privacy Law and the FTC"]. Issuu. New York University School of Law. p. 105. Retrieved 12 December 2019.
  8. ^ "What You Should Know". Issuu. U.S. Chamber of Commerce Foundation. p. 74. Retrieved 12 December 2019.
  9. ^ Golden, Hallie. "Defending the Digital Consumer" (PDF). No. July/August 2015. Government Executive. Retrieved 19 December 2019.
  10. ^ Selinger, Evan; Hartzog, Woody (April 15, 2015). "Why you have the right to obscurity". Christian Science Monitor. Retrieved 19 December 2019.
  11. ^ Harrison, Erin E. (December 22, 2014). "The Privacy Puzzle". Inside Counsel. Retrieved 19 December 2019.
  12. ^ Swift, Mike (June 10, 2014). "Profile: FTC's Brill emerges as key player in national, international regulation" (PDF). MLex. Retrieved 27 December 2019.
  13. ^ McConnell, Bill (September 4, 2012). "Q&A with the FTC's Julie Brill by Bill McConnell" (PDF). The Deal Pipeline. Retrieved 27 December 2019.
  14. ^ Wellford, Hill; Hann, Bree. "Interview of FTC Commissioner Julie Brill" (PDF). ABA Section of Antitrust Law Federal Civil Enforcement Committee Newsletter (November-December 2010): 8–9. Retrieved 3 January 2020.
  15. ^ Fredman, Catherine. "Consumer Guardian". Issuu. NYU Law Magazine. p. 40. Retrieved 3 December 2019.
  16. ^ Golden, Hallie. "Defending the Digital Consumer" (PDF). No. July/August 2015. Government Executive. Retrieved 19 December 2019.
  17. ^ Swift, Mike (June 10, 2014). "Profile: FTC's Brill emerges as key player in national, international regulation" (PDF). MLex. Retrieved 27 December 2019.
  18. ^ McConnell, Bill (September 4, 2012). "Q&A with the FTC's Julie Brill by Bill McConnell" (PDF). The Deal Pipeline. Retrieved 27 December 2019.
  19. ^ Swift, Mike (June 10, 2014). "Profile: FTC's Brill emerges as key player in national, international regulation" (PDF). MLex. Retrieved 27 December 2019.
  20. ^ McConnell, Bill (September 4, 2012). "Q&A with the FTC's Julie Brill by Bill McConnell" (PDF). The Deal Pipeline. Retrieved 27 December 2019.
  21. ^ "Security, Privacy and Regulatory Concerns". Issuu. Tuck School of Business at Dartmouth Glassmeyer/McNamee Center for Digital Strategies. p. 16-17. Retrieved 12 December 2019.
  22. ^ Brill, Julie (September 8, 2013). "Regulators Must Guide the Internet of Things". The New York Times. Retrieved 27 December 2019.
  23. ^ Wyatt, Edward; Vega, Tanzina (November 11, 2010). "Privacy Matters: Stage Set for Showdown on Online Privacy". New York Times Service. Retrieved 13 December 2019. {{cite news}}: Cite has empty unknown parameter: |1= (help)
  24. ^ Bracy, Jedidiah (March 10, 2014). "Knocking Down Silos and Weaving the Tapestry: A Look at the Priorities of FTC Commissioner Julie Brill". IAPP The Privacy Advisor. Retrieved 27 December 2019. {{cite news}}: Cite has empty unknown parameter: |1= (help)
  25. ^ Kroft, Steve (March 9, 2014). "The Data Brokers: Selling your personal information". CBS 60 Minutes. Retrieved 27 December 2019.

Thank you for your help, TechSeaSpokes2004 (talk) 22:58, 3 January 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Reply 3-JAN-2020

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  Unable to review  

  • The Wiki-markup proposed to be used as references contains several date errors in the formatting (13 in total) including one additional reference error.[a] As Wikipedia is a volunteer effort, correct formatting is generally expected to be done before the request is submitted for review by other fellow editors.
  • Please re-format the dates of the references, taking care to ensure that publication dates are used. If no publication date is given, the "last accessed" date of today (Jan 3, 2020) may be used for active URL's.
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Regards,  Spintendo  03:19, 4 January 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Notes

  1. ^ The date errors in question appear to have occurred because the following format was being used: m/d/y (or 1/3/2020); when date formats should be entered as month date, year (January 3, 2020) or date month year (3 January 2020).

Reply 7-JAN-2020

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Thanks for your direction. Appreciate you taking a look and providing that information. I believe I've made all the corrections in the updated edit request below. Thank you. TechSeaSpokes2004 (talk) 23:19, 6 January 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Proposed changes:

Edit request

Information to be added: [1] [2] Explanation of issue: Additional citations needed for statement, where she studied under a Root-Tilden Scholarship.


Information to be added: [3] Explanation of issue: Additional citations needed for statement: Brill received the New York University School of Law Alumna of the Year Award in 2014.”


Information to be added: [4]

Explanation of issue: Additional citations needed for statements: “Brill wrote the Commission’s unanimous decision in ProMedica dissolving the merger of two hospitals in Toledo, Ohio. Brill’s ProMedica decision was upheld on appeal by Sixth Circuit of the United States Circuit Court.”

TechSeaSpokes2004 (talk) 22:50, 3 January 2020 (UTC)[reply]

This is the same person from Microsoft with some additional requests. I also have some requested additions for content, with the necessary source materials.

Information to be changed: Delete Brill is an advocate for consumer privacy,” and replace with “While at the FTC, Brill also focused on privacy implications of emerging technologies, including how personal data is gathered and used, and its effect on consumer privacy.” Citations: [5] [6] [7] [8] [9] [10]> [11] [12] [13] [14] Explanation of issue: Additional citations needed for statement, expand to include more about her involvement.

Information to be added: “Brill served as assistant attorney general for consumer protection and antitrust for the state of Vermont from 1988 – 2008. As a Vermont assistant attorney general in 1991, Brill and her staff discovered that 3,000 Vermont residents were identified as having tax liens against them by a consumer credit reporting agency. Brill testified in front of Congress about the ways in which credit reporting agencies were hurting consumers, which contributed to the 1996 revisions to the Fair Credit Reporting Act, the first substantial revisions in 25 years.” Information to be added: [15] [16] [17] [18] Explanation of issue: More relevant information about her background in consumer protection and notable moments during her time as assistant attorney general of Vermont with historical impact.

Information to be added: “While serving at the state level, Brill also worked to coordinate with other states as co-chair of the Privacy Working Group at the National Association of Attorneys General.” Citation: [19] [20] Explanation of issue: More relevant information about her background in consumer protection and notable moments during her time as assistant attorney general of Vermont with historical impact.

Information to be added: “Brill was nominated by President Barack Obama to serve as a Commissioner on the U.S. Federal Trade Commission in 2009. Her nomination was confirmed unanimously by the U.S. Senate on March 3, 2010 and she was sworn in on April 6, 2010.” References supporting change: Cite error: A <ref> tag is missing the closing </ref> (see the help page). Explanation of issue: More relevant information about her background in consumer protection and notable moments during her time as FTC Commissioner.

Information to be added: “Brill also took action against a wide range of tech companies for failing to secure personal data properly, calling for more protections for consumers regarding the inappropriate use of data behind the scenes.” Citations: [21] [22] Explanation of issue: More relevant information about her background in consumer protection and notable moments during her time as FTC Commissioner.

Information to be added: “Brill supported the development of a “do not track” feature to allow Internet users to tell websites to stop tracking their online activities and collecting information about them.” Citations: [23] Explanation of issue: More relevant information about her background in consumer protection and notable moments during her time as FTC Commissioner.

Information to be added: “While at the FTC, Brill created the “Reclaim Your Name” project designed to encourage more transparency within the data broker industry. She appeared on CBS 60 Minutes in 2014 to discuss the data broker industry and what needs to change to provide more control and information for consumers.” Citations: [24] [25] Explanation of issue: More relevant information about her background in consumer protection and notable moments during her time as FTC Commissioner.

Reply 6-JAN-2020

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Thanks for your direction. Appreciate you taking a look and providing that information. I believe I've made all the corrections in the updated edit request below. Thank you. TechSeaSpokes2004 (talk) 23:19, 6 January 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Proposed changes:

Edit request

Information to be added: [26] [27] Explanation of issue: Additional citations needed for statement, where she studied under a Root-Tilden Scholarship.


Information to be added: [28] Explanation of issue: Additional citations needed for statement: Brill received the New York University School of Law Alumna of the Year Award in 2014.”


Information to be added: [29]

Explanation of issue: Additional citations needed for statements: “Brill wrote the Commission’s unanimous decision in ProMedica dissolving the merger of two hospitals in Toledo, Ohio. Brill’s ProMedica decision was upheld on appeal by Sixth Circuit of the United States Circuit Court.”

TechSeaSpokes2004 (talk) 22:50, 3 January 2020 (UTC)[reply]

This is the same person from Microsoft with some additional requests. I also have some requested additions for content, with the necessary source materials.

Information to be changed: Delete Brill is an advocate for consumer privacy,” and replace with “While at the FTC, Brill also focused on privacy implications of emerging technologies, including how personal data is gathered and used, and its effect on consumer privacy.” Citations: [30] [31] [32] [33] [34] [35]> [36] [37] [38] [39] Explanation of issue: Additional citations needed for statement, expand to include more about her involvement.

Information to be added: “Brill served as assistant attorney general for consumer protection and antitrust for the state of Vermont from 1988 – 2008. As a Vermont assistant attorney general in 1991, Brill and her staff discovered that 3,000 Vermont residents were identified as having tax liens against them by a consumer credit reporting agency. Brill testified in front of Congress about the ways in which credit reporting agencies were hurting consumers, which contributed to the 1996 revisions to the Fair Credit Reporting Act, the first substantial revisions in 25 years.” Information to be added: [40] [41] [42] [43] Explanation of issue: More relevant information about her background in consumer protection and notable moments during her time as assistant attorney general of Vermont with historical impact.

Information to be added: “While serving at the state level, Brill also worked to coordinate with other states as co-chair of the Privacy Working Group at the National Association of Attorneys General.” Citation: [44] [45] Explanation of issue: More relevant information about her background in consumer protection and notable moments during her time as assistant attorney general of Vermont with historical impact.

Information to be added: “Brill was nominated by President Barack Obama to serve as a Commissioner on the U.S. Federal Trade Commission in 2009. Her nomination was confirmed unanimously by the U.S. Senate on March 3, 2010 and she was sworn in on April 6, 2010.” References supporting change: Cite error: A <ref> tag is missing the closing </ref> (see the help page). Explanation of issue: More relevant information about her background in consumer protection and notable moments during her time as FTC Commissioner.

Information to be added: “Brill also took action against a wide range of tech companies for failing to secure personal data properly, calling for more protections for consumers regarding the inappropriate use of data behind the scenes.” Citations: [46] [47] Explanation of issue: More relevant information about her background in consumer protection and notable moments during her time as FTC Commissioner.

Information to be added: “Brill supported the development of a “do not track” feature to allow Internet users to tell websites to stop tracking their online activities and collecting information about them.” Citations: [48] Explanation of issue: More relevant information about her background in consumer protection and notable moments during her time as FTC Commissioner.

Information to be added: “While at the FTC, Brill created the “Reclaim Your Name” project designed to encourage more transparency within the data broker industry. She appeared on CBS 60 Minutes in 2014 to discuss the data broker industry and what needs to change to provide more control and information for consumers.” Citations: [49] [50] Explanation of issue: More relevant information about her background in consumer protection and notable moments during her time as FTC Commissioner.

References

  1. ^ Rodriguez, Gina. "Tending the Roots". Issuu. NYU Law Magazine. p. 29. Retrieved 3 December 2019.
  2. ^ Dewey, Katrina (2017). "The Law School Road Trip". LawDragon (18): 30. Retrieved 3 December 2019.
  3. ^ Fredman, Catherine. "Consumer Guardian". Issuu. NYU Law Magazine. p. 40. Retrieved 3 December 2019.
  4. ^ Swift, Mike (June 10, 2014). "Profile: FTC's Brill emerges as key player in national, international regulation" (PDF). MLex. Retrieved 27 December 2019.
  5. ^ Fredman, Catherine. "Consumer Guardian". Issuu. NYU Law Magazine. p. 40. Retrieved 3 December 2019.
  6. ^ "North Carolina Law Review Hosts Annual Symposium "Social Networks and the Law"". Issuu. Carolina Law. p. 3. Retrieved 12 December 2019.
  7. ^ [ttps://issuu.com/nyulaw/docs/2012mag "Privacy Law and the FTC"]. Issuu. New York University School of Law. p. 105. Retrieved 12 December 2019.
  8. ^ "What You Should Know". Issuu. U.S. Chamber of Commerce Foundation. p. 74. Retrieved 12 December 2019.
  9. ^ Golden, Hallie. "Defending the Digital Consumer" (PDF). No. July-August 2015. Government Executive. Retrieved 19 December 2019.
  10. ^ Selinger, Evan; Hartzog, Woody (April 15, 2015). "Why you have the right to obscurity". Christian Science Monitor. Retrieved 19 December 2019.
  11. ^ Harrison, Erin E. (December 22, 2014). "The Privacy Puzzle". Inside Counsel. Retrieved 19 December 2019.
  12. ^ Swift, Mike (June 10, 2014). "Profile: FTC's Brill emerges as key player in national, international regulation" (PDF). MLex. Retrieved 27 December 2019.
  13. ^ McConnell, Bill (September 4, 2012). "Q&A with the FTC's Julie Brill by Bill McConnell" (PDF). The Deal Pipeline. Retrieved 27 December 2019.
  14. ^ Wellford, Hill; Hann, Bree. "Interview of FTC Commissioner Julie Brill" (PDF). ABA Section of Antitrust Law Federal Civil Enforcement Committee Newsletter (November-December 2010): 8–9. Retrieved 3 January 2020.
  15. ^ Fredman, Catherine. "Consumer Guardian". Issuu. NYU Law Magazine. p. 40. Retrieved 3 December 2019.
  16. ^ Golden, Hallie. "Defending the Digital Consumer" (PDF). No. July/August 2015. Government Executive. Retrieved 19 December 2019.
  17. ^ Swift, Mike (June 10, 2014). "Profile: FTC's Brill emerges as key player in national, international regulation" (PDF). MLex. Retrieved 27 December 2019.
  18. ^ McConnell, Bill (September 4, 2012). "Q&A with the FTC's Julie Brill by Bill McConnell" (PDF). The Deal Pipeline. Retrieved 27 December 2019.
  19. ^ Swift, Mike (June 10, 2014). "Profile: FTC's Brill emerges as key player in national, international regulation" (PDF). MLex. Retrieved 27 December 2019.
  20. ^ McConnell, Bill (September 4, 2012). "Q&A with the FTC's Julie Brill by Bill McConnell" (PDF). The Deal Pipeline. Retrieved 27 December 2019.
  21. ^ "Security, Privacy and Regulatory Concerns". Issuu. Tuck School of Business at Dartmouth Glassmeyer/McNamee Center for Digital Strategies. p. 16-17. Retrieved 12 December 2019.
  22. ^ Brill, Julie (September 8, 2013). "Regulators Must Guide the Internet of Things". The New York Times. Retrieved 27 December 2019.
  23. ^ Wyatt, Edward; Vega, Tanzina (November 11, 2010). "Privacy Matters: Stage Set for Showdown on Online Privacy". New York Times Service. Retrieved 13 December 2019. {{cite news}}: Cite has empty unknown parameter: |1= (help)
  24. ^ Bracy, Jedidiah (March 10, 2014). "Knocking Down Silos and Weaving the Tapestry: A Look at the Priorities of FTC Commissioner Julie Brill". IAPP The Privacy Advisor. Retrieved 27 December 2019. {{cite news}}: Cite has empty unknown parameter: |1= (help)
  25. ^ Kroft, Steve (March 9, 2014). "The Data Brokers: Selling your personal information". CBS 60 Minutes. Retrieved 27 December 2019.
  26. ^ Rodriguez, Gina. "Tending the Roots". Issuu. NYU Law Magazine. p. 29. Retrieved 3 December 2019.
  27. ^ Dewey, Katrina (2017). "The Law School Road Trip". LawDragon (18): 30. Retrieved 3 December 2019.
  28. ^ Fredman, Catherine. "Consumer Guardian". Issuu. NYU Law Magazine. p. 40. Retrieved 3 December 2019.
  29. ^ Swift, Mike (June 10, 2014). "Profile: FTC's Brill emerges as key player in national, international regulation" (PDF). MLex. Retrieved 27 December 2019.
  30. ^ Fredman, Catherine. "Consumer Guardian". Issuu. NYU Law Magazine. p. 40. Retrieved 3 December 2019.
  31. ^ "North Carolina Law Review Hosts Annual Symposium "Social Networks and the Law"". Issuu. Carolina Law. p. 3. Retrieved 12 December 2019.
  32. ^ [ttps://issuu.com/nyulaw/docs/2012mag "Privacy Law and the FTC"]. Issuu. New York University School of Law. p. 105. Retrieved 12 December 2019.
  33. ^ "What You Should Know". Issuu. U.S. Chamber of Commerce Foundation. p. 74. Retrieved 12 December 2019.
  34. ^ Golden, Hallie. "Defending the Digital Consumer" (PDF). No. July-August 2015. Government Executive. Retrieved 19 December 2019.
  35. ^ Selinger, Evan; Hartzog, Woody (April 15, 2015). "Why you have the right to obscurity". Christian Science Monitor. Retrieved 19 December 2019.
  36. ^ Harrison, Erin E. (December 22, 2014). "The Privacy Puzzle". Inside Counsel. Retrieved 19 December 2019.
  37. ^ Swift, Mike (June 10, 2014). "Profile: FTC's Brill emerges as key player in national, international regulation" (PDF). MLex. Retrieved 27 December 2019.
  38. ^ McConnell, Bill (September 4, 2012). "Q&A with the FTC's Julie Brill by Bill McConnell" (PDF). The Deal Pipeline. Retrieved 27 December 2019.
  39. ^ Wellford, Hill; Hann, Bree. "Interview of FTC Commissioner Julie Brill" (PDF). ABA Section of Antitrust Law Federal Civil Enforcement Committee Newsletter (November-December 2010): 8–9. Retrieved 3 January 2020.
  40. ^ Fredman, Catherine. "Consumer Guardian". Issuu. NYU Law Magazine. p. 40. Retrieved 3 December 2019.
  41. ^ Golden, Hallie. "Defending the Digital Consumer" (PDF). No. July/August 2015. Government Executive. Retrieved 19 December 2019.
  42. ^ Swift, Mike (June 10, 2014). "Profile: FTC's Brill emerges as key player in national, international regulation" (PDF). MLex. Retrieved 27 December 2019.
  43. ^ McConnell, Bill (September 4, 2012). "Q&A with the FTC's Julie Brill by Bill McConnell" (PDF). The Deal Pipeline. Retrieved 27 December 2019.
  44. ^ Swift, Mike (June 10, 2014). "Profile: FTC's Brill emerges as key player in national, international regulation" (PDF). MLex. Retrieved 27 December 2019.
  45. ^ McConnell, Bill (September 4, 2012). "Q&A with the FTC's Julie Brill by Bill McConnell" (PDF). The Deal Pipeline. Retrieved 27 December 2019.
  46. ^ "Security, Privacy and Regulatory Concerns". Issuu. Tuck School of Business at Dartmouth Glassmeyer/McNamee Center for Digital Strategies. p. 16-17. Retrieved 12 December 2019.
  47. ^ Brill, Julie (September 8, 2013). "Regulators Must Guide the Internet of Things". The New York Times. Retrieved 27 December 2019.
  48. ^ Wyatt, Edward; Vega, Tanzina (November 11, 2010). "Privacy Matters: Stage Set for Showdown on Online Privacy". New York Times Service. Retrieved 13 December 2019. {{cite news}}: Cite has empty unknown parameter: |1= (help)
  49. ^ Bracy, Jedidiah (March 10, 2014). "Knocking Down Silos and Weaving the Tapestry: A Look at the Priorities of FTC Commissioner Julie Brill". IAPP The Privacy Advisor. Retrieved 27 December 2019. {{cite news}}: Cite has empty unknown parameter: |1= (help)
  50. ^ Kroft, Steve (March 9, 2014). "The Data Brokers: Selling your personal information". CBS 60 Minutes. Retrieved 27 December 2019.

Reply 30-JAN-2020

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Still waiting for the above changes to be addressed so re-adding "request edit" tag. Thanks, TechSeaSpokes2004 (talk) 22:20, 30 January 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Thank you for reformatting the references, it is much appreciated. However, many references are still deficient. In more than a few instances, only the retrieved date has been given. In a check of 5 random selections, the date was available in all 5 instances, yet the date was not added to the reference. Certain other references are missing author information. Please also note that certain references are to be avoided. Those in the legal industry, such as law school publications, US Chamber of Commerce publications, and those publications which monitor and report on the legal and commerce industries, should all be avoided because those publications are not reliable sources in the same way that say, the New York Times would be considered reliable. Regards,  Spintendo  21:24, 2 February 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Revised COI Edit Request to Comply with Citation Requirements and Date Listings

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Hi, I work at Microsoft, and have revised my COI edit requests and resubmitted them below. Please consider the below changes, thank you, TechSeaSpokes2004 (talk) 23:42, 26 March 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Information to be changed: Delete "Brill is an advocate for consumer privacy,” and replace with “While at the FTC, Brill also focused on privacy implications of emerging technologies, including how personal data is gathered and used, and its effect on consumer privacy.” Citations: [1] [2] [3] [4] [5] Explanation of issue: Additional citations needed for statement, expand to include more about her involvement.

Information to be added: “Brill served as assistant attorney general for consumer protection and antitrust for the state of Vermont from 1988 – 2008. As a Vermont assistant attorney general in 1991, Brill and her staff discovered that 3,000 Vermont residents were identified as having tax liens against them by a consumer credit reporting agency. Brill testified in front of Congress about the ways in which credit reporting agencies were hurting consumers, which contributed to the 1996 revisions to the Fair Credit Reporting Act, the first substantial revisions in 25 years.” Citations: [6] [7] [8] Explanation of issue: More relevant information about her background in consumer protection and notable moments during her time as assistant attorney general of Vermont with historical impact.

Information to be added: “While serving at the state level, Brill also worked to coordinate with other states as co-chair of the Privacy Working Group at the National Association of Attorneys General.” Citation: [9] [10] Explanation of issue: More relevant information about her background in consumer protection and notable moments during her time as assistant attorney general of Vermont with historical impact.

Information to be added: “Brill was nominated by President Barack Obama to serve as a Commissioner on the U.S. Federal Trade Commission in 2009. Her nomination was confirmed unanimously by the U.S. Senate on March 3, 2010 and she was sworn in on April 6, 2010.” References supporting change: [11] [12] [13] [14] [15] Explanation of issue: More relevant information about her time as FTC Commissioner.

Information to be added: “Brill also took action against a wide range of tech companies for failing to secure personal data properly, calling for more protections for consumers regarding the inappropriate use of data behind the scenes.” Citations: [16] Explanation of issue: More relevant information about her background in consumer protection and notable moments during her time as FTC Commissioner.

Information to be added: “Brill supported the development of a “do not track” feature to allow Internet users to tell websites to stop tracking their online activities and collecting information about them.” Citations: [17] Explanation of issue: More relevant information about her background in consumer protection and notable moments during her time as FTC Commissioner.

Information to be added: “While at the FTC, Brill created the “Reclaim Your Name” project designed to encourage more transparency within the data broker industry. She appeared on CBS 60 Minutes in 2014 to discuss the data broker industry and what needs to change to provide more control and information for consumers.” Citations: [18] [19] Explanation of issue: More relevant information about her background in consumer protection and notable moments during her time as FTC Commissioner.

 Done Your edits have been added to the article. I have, however, left the citations needed tag on the article as more are indeed needed to properly source the article. Don Spencertalk-to-me⛅ 19:31, 10 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]

References

  1. ^ Golden, Hallie (July 8, 2015). "Defending the Digital Consumer". No. July-August 2015. Government Executive. Retrieved 19 December 2019.
  2. ^ Selinger, Evan; Hartzog, Woody (April 15, 2015). "Why you have the right to obscurity". Christian Science Monitor. Retrieved 19 December 2019.
  3. ^ Harrison, Erin E. (December 22, 2014). "The Privacy Puzzle". Inside Counsel. Retrieved 19 December 2019.
  4. ^ Swift, Mike (June 10, 2014). "Profile: FTC's Brill emerges as key player in national, international regulation" (PDF). MLex. Retrieved 27 December 2019.
  5. ^ McConnell, Bill (September 4, 2012). "Q&A with the FTC's Julie Brill by Bill McConnell" (PDF). The Deal Pipeline. Retrieved 27 December 2019.
  6. ^ Golden, Hallie (July 8, 2015). "Defending the Digital Consumer". No. July-August 2015. Government Executive. Retrieved 19 December 2019.
  7. ^ Swift, Mike (June 10, 2014). "Profile: FTC's Brill emerges as key player in national, international regulation" (PDF). MLex. Retrieved 27 December 2019.
  8. ^ McConnell, Bill (September 4, 2012). "Q&A with the FTC's Julie Brill by Bill McConnell" (PDF). The Deal Pipeline. Retrieved 27 December 2019.
  9. ^ Swift, Mike (June 10, 2014). "Profile: FTC's Brill emerges as key player in national, international regulation" (PDF). MLex. Retrieved 27 December 2019.
  10. ^ McConnell, Bill (September 4, 2012). "Q&A with the FTC's Julie Brill by Bill McConnell" (PDF). The Deal Pipeline. Retrieved 27 December 2019.
  11. ^ "President Obama Announces More Key Administration Posts, 11/16/2009". obamawhitehouse.archives.gov. Obama White House. November 16, 2009. Retrieved 26 March 2020.
  12. ^ "Presidential Nominations Sent to the Senate, 11/17/09". obamawhitehouse.archives.gov. Obama White House. November 17, 2009. Retrieved 26 March 2020.
  13. ^ "Senate Approves Obama's FTC Nominees". Law360. March 4, 2010. Retrieved 26 March 2020.
  14. ^ "Senate panel approves two Obama nominees for FTC". Reuters. December 17, 2009. Retrieved 26 March 2020.
  15. ^ "Julie Brill Begins Term at Federal Trade Commission". U.S. Federal Trade Commission. April 6, 2010. Retrieved 26 March 2020.
  16. ^ Brill, Julie (September 8, 2013). "Regulators Must Guide the Internet of Things". The New York Times. Retrieved 27 December 2019.
  17. ^ Wyatt, Edward; Vega, Tanzina (November 11, 2010). "Privacy Matters: Stage Set for Showdown on Online Privacy". New York Times Service. Retrieved 13 December 2019. {{cite news}}: Cite has empty unknown parameter: |1= (help)
  18. ^ Bracy, Jedidiah (March 10, 2014). "Knocking Down Silos and Weaving the Tapestry: A Look at the Priorities of FTC Commissioner Julie Brill". IAPP The Privacy Advisor. Retrieved 27 December 2019. {{cite news}}: Cite has empty unknown parameter: |1= (help)
  19. ^ Kroft, Steve (March 9, 2014). "The Data Brokers: Selling your personal information". CBS 60 Minutes. Retrieved 27 December 2019.

More citation work needed?

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@SlimVirgin: Sarah, I'd love to get your opinion of what more needs to be done to improve citations. On GW's talk, you wrote: "For example, look at the reception section. Some of it seems to be based on personal websites and similar." Is that your main objection, or are there other issues? I'm not going to make a specific suggestion just yet, without knowing what the specific issues are, but I'd like to know what you think those problems are; and then we will work on fixing them. (You know my COI notice, but let's observe the formalities.)--GRuban (talk) 03:52, 23 December 2020 (UTC)[reply]

You say on your COI page that you work for Microsoft, so you shouldn't edit the article. Did the company mention the tag to you? SarahSV (talk) 04:04, 23 December 2020 (UTC)[reply]
I didn't and won't. Come on, you know me, Sarah. We worked on numerous WP:GGTF things together, and when I had my first COI article I went to you to approve it. I'm going to follow all the rules here. Yes they did, and I said I think I can probably help. Without editing the article directly. In fact, I probably won't even make the edit requests here directly, partly because I don't know exactly what they want, and partly because, as it says on my COI page, I want them to do it. --GRuban (talk) 04:16, 23 December 2020 (UTC)[reply]
Okay, thanks, but you didn't tell GorillaWarfare that. When I said it was okay that first time years ago, that's because I thought it was a one-off (and you said she hadn't asked you), but your COI page shows there has been a lot more. SarahSV (talk) 04:22, 23 December 2020 (UTC)[reply]
Two more. (Honestly, it hurts my feelings that you think I've somehow turned from a real editor into a company shill: here are my last four main space edits just today, the article images for three DYKs in the last 24 hours: two American cartoonists, a German musicologist, and a British hut; last month I wrote the article, not just the image, for a Malaysian entertainer which was the second most viewed DYK article for all December; though GGTF has quieted down a bit, look what I've been doing instead for women's articles for years now... and this is no less a woman's article... I mean, I know I'm not in your league of multiple FAs, but honestly I do all right) Anyway, what are the issues? They shall be dealt with! --GRuban (talk) 04:34, 23 December 2020 (UTC)[reply]
Okay, I'm sorry, I'll shut up. My apologies. The sourcing isn't good, but I don't want to end up having to fix the article for free. That's what always happens; someone complains about COI editing, and the company ends up getting the article tidied for nothing. Again, I'm sorry for blowing up. SarahSV (talk) 05:55, 23 December 2020 (UTC)[reply]
S'arright. I've gotten worse. Meanwhile, back to the article: I see you've removed most of the Reception section and moved one sentence up. Are you currently reasonably happy with the article, or do you think it needs more to avoid getting some sort of leading template? --GRuban (talk) 15:39, 23 December 2020 (UTC)[reply]
The article's in poor shape. "Early life and education" covers up to her law degree in 1985. Then it jumps to "Career", which begins "While at the FTC, Brill also focused on privacy implications", which was in 2010. The section goes backwards for some reason: 1988–2008, then to 1991, then back to 2009. The sources are poor and not cited clearly. It would benefit from a rewrite by uninvolved editors and more independent secondary sources, which is why the tag (that one or some other) was not a bad idea; it alerted the reader that there's a problem. SarahSV (talk) 20:27, 23 December 2020 (UTC)[reply]

I'll ask, but to be honest, it's surprisingly hard to find independent indepth sources about Federal Trade Commissioners. There are lots of US government sources on them, and there are lots of interviews with them, and while those are highly reliable, they're not independent. Let's go to Federal_Trade_Commission#List_of_former_commissioners - they all have articles - and compare this article with those above and below her:

  • Jon Leibowitz March 2, 2009 – March 7, 2013 35 sources, but almost all from ftc.gov
  • Joshua D. Wright January 11, 2013 – August 24, 2015 6 sources, most of the article written on two from ftc.gov and his own testimony
  • Julie Brill April 6, 2010 – March 31, 2016 this article
  • Edith Ramirez April 5, 2010 – February 10, 2017 4 sources, 3 FTC press releases
  • Terrell McSweeny April 28, 2014 – April 27, 2018 2 sources, FTC and an interview

We can't get blood from a stone, and we apparently can't get independent sources about FTC commissioners! What would you say to https://www.law.columbia.edu/news/archive/julie-brill-serve-commissioner-ftc and https://www.law.nyu.edu/alumni/almo/pastalmos/2010-11almos/juliebrillnovember ? They're from her law schools, so again not ideal, but at least would provide a variety of "involved" sourcing besides just FTC and interviews. Would they help? --GRuban (talk) 22:52, 23 December 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Those sources are better than nothing but not ideal. Leibowitz has two W/Post articles, Wright a National Review article, Ramirez a Wall Street Journal article (and a BLP sources tag), and McSweeny has nothing and is tagged. Is someone regarded as notable simply because they were a commissioner with the FTC? SarahSV (talk) 03:36, 24 December 2020 (UTC)[reply]
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