Talk:Juan Pujol García/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Thurgate (talk · contribs) 15:37, 11 May 2012 (UTC)[reply]

GA review (see here for criteria)

It is reasonably well written.
prose: (MoS):
It is factually accurate and verifiable.
It is broad in its coverage.
a (major aspects): b (focused):
It follows the neutral point of view policy.
Fair representation without bias:
It is stable.
No edit wars etc.:
It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Overall:
Pass/Fail:

Comments

1. – if there were any others; this is uncertain. Suggest - if there were any others -

Done

2. He attended Mossen. Suggest - did Joan attend that school?

Re-wrote section for hopefully greater clarity. Will add reference quote soon.

3. The rest were enemy agents who had been discovered and turned, which required that they work under guard. Suggest - Needs a citation at the end

Will do.

4. For his efforts aiding the Allies Garbo received an MBE from King George VI, on 25 November 1944.[45] In an ironic twist, on 29 July 1944 Arabel was awarded. Suggest - swapping the two around so its in a chronological order

Done.

5. and two sons. Suggest - and had two sons

Re-wrote that section. The language was rather clunky and unclear. Hopefully the new revision is clearer. K8 fan (talk) 18:07, 11 May 2012 (UTC)[reply]

6. In the fictitious agents section is the Dark blue/purple color representing another agent or what the agent above him did during the war?

The boxes labeled "Agent" had sub-agents. Will expand it to indicate this more clearly.

I've put the article on hold for seven days to allow you to address the issues I've brought up. Feel free to contact me on my talk page, or here with any concerns. Thurgate (talk) 15:37, 11 May 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Thank you for your review. We will address each of those issues within the next week.K8 fan (talk) 16:51, 11 May 2012 (UTC)[reply]

I'm happy with the changes you have made. Would it be possible if you leave a comment under this one when all changes have been implemented eg. you are done adding all the references. Thanks in advance. Thurgate (talk) 21:23, 11 May 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Will do. I'm traveling at the moment and away from my reference books, but will have access to them in two days and will:

Expand Agent/sub-Agent chart.
Add quote to reference about school.
Search to see if Pujol's daughter's name is mentioned.
Add reference from Harris/Seaman book about security considerations for other XX double-agents.

Thanks again for taking them time to review the article.K8 fan (talk) 23:37, 11 May 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Ah k, sounds good to me and enjoy your travels :) Thurgate (talk) 00:19, 12 May 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Working on re-building the chart at the moment, and adding considerable detail from Harris:Seaman book appendices.K8 fan (talk) 23:03, 22 May 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Ok, sounds good. Leave me a note either here or on my talk page when you have completed all of the changes. Thanks. Thurgate (talk) 22:31, 23 May 2012 (UTC)[reply]

My apologies, I have been consumed by my real-world job for the past several weeks and have been unable to contribute. K8 fan (talk) 20:20, 7 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]

No worries, real life always takes priority over anything on the internet! Would you like me to keep the review open? Thurgate (talk) 20:54, 7 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Since K8 hasn't edited in the past month sans the one above edit, it may be best to fail the article; he can always fix and re-nom when he gains free time. Wizardman _{Operation Big Bear} 16:51, 18 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Actually both parties are inactive, so I'll do so. Wizardman _{Operation Big Bear} 05:30, 24 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]