Talk:Joyce Young
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notes on my edit
[edit]I did a minor overhaul on this article because I saw enough things that could be repaired relatively easily to make a project of it.
Please note that Joyce Young did not go to Strathallan School, as it is a school for boys in Scotland. She went to, rather, Hillfield Strathallan College, in Ontario, Canada. I also removed the term "the late" from the article, because a memorial for soldiers makes their deaths quite obvious, as well as the fact that every WWI veteran is dead; the father's commission making it impossible for him to be alive. The rest of the work was just shuffling material around and proofreading to make the article look a little more Wiki-ish.Yabopomonofonomopo bay (talk) 00:14, 18 June 2013 (UTC)
- Joyce certainly went to Strathallen School which was in Hamilton, Ontario. Hillfield was a boys school until Hillfield and Strathallen merged in 1963 or 1964. JATOR1950 (talk) 02:39, 24 November 2022 (UTC)