Talk:Joseph L. Cahall/GA1
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Nominator: BeanieFan11 (talk · contribs) 01:54, 22 October 2024 (UTC)
Reviewer: WikiOriginal-9 (talk · contribs) 05:55, 26 October 2024 (UTC)
- It is reasonably well written.
- It is factually accurate and verifiable.
- a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism):
- a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism):
- It is broad in its coverage.
- a (major aspects): b (focused):
- a (major aspects): b (focused):
- It follows the neutral point of view policy.
- Fair representation without bias:
- Fair representation without bias:
- It is stable.
- No edit wars, etc.:
- No edit wars, etc.:
- It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
- a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- Overall:
- Pass/Fail:
- Pass/Fail:
- Lead needs expanded.
- Expanded.
- Changed cat 1800s births to 19th century births. 1800s is for the decade.
- "taking the offices of Jacob Moore" What's that mean?
- I'm not completely sure – removed that part.
- What's a Levy Court?
- Added a note – it was the county government.
- "He joined the Sussex County bar" put "as well" after bar. I think that is needed there to show that was happening at the same time as the Levy Court thing. Otherwise, readers will think it is out of order.
- Added.
- "Delaware Constitutional Convention of 1896–97" Is there a link for any of that?
- There should be, but no one has written an article for it... (on my long-term to-do list)
- I'm confused. The infobox says 1905 to 1909 but the article says he was ousted in 1909??
- He was ousted as Union Republican chairman, not as Secretary of State – any suggestions on how to clarify it better?
- "ousted as chairman"
- He was ousted as Union Republican chairman, not as Secretary of State – any suggestions on how to clarify it better?
- "After having served as Secretary of State for four years, he retired" Who retired? Cahall or Bennett??
- Cahall – changed.
That's all I think. Excellent research on this. ~WikiOriginal-9~ (talk) 05:55, 26 October 2024 (UTC)