Talk:Jon Corzine/GA2

GA Reassessment

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Result: Delisted. Legitimate concerns, no opposition or improvements made; Matters raised in the reassessment were not addressed. These matters will remain valid until the next GA Review, whereupon they must be addressed first. --Whiteguru (talk) 20:33, 10 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Starts GA Reassessment. The reassessment will follow the same sections of the Article. Thank you --Whiteguru (talk) 12:25, 1 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Instructions: https://wiki.riteme.site/wiki/Wikipedia:Good_article_reassessment

Observations

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)

   HTML document size: 393 kB
   Prose size (including all HTML code): 70 kB
   References (including all HTML code): 199 kB
   Wiki text: 110 kB
   Prose size (text only): 39 kB (6444 words) "readable prose size"
   References (text only): 30 kB

It is reasonably well written.
a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):

The Lede is too short. There is a tag on this page to this effect.
Infobox is comprehensive.
Tenure section is excessively overlinked. See WP:MOSLINK

It is factually accurate and verifiable.
a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism):

Reference 2 is a dead link
All links to Time Magazine are dead links. Run the Internet Archive Bot over this page.
There are seven citation needed tags on the page.
There are no references for the Electoral History tables.
Committee assignment section has a^{[citation needed]} tag outstanding since 2019
every resident to enrol in a health plan and have taxpayers help pick up the tab for all the welfare low- and middle-income residents. In June 2008, state legislators voted for the first phase of that program mandating health care coverage and Corzine signed it into law in July.[citation needed]
Corzine was one of several United States Governors and following in this paragraph is overlinked.
MF Global section is too big; (MF Global and their collapse have their own article.)(Corzine has a complete section in this article.) This section is too large, reduce it to three paragraphs. Current paragraph 3 is far too large and contains material that belongs on the MF Global page.

It is broad in its coverage.
a (major aspects): b (focused):

It is meet and fitting that Corzine spent $62 million on his senate election campaign. This election has its own page and this section may be effectively trimmed back to three paragraphs. Too much detail, see WP:PROSELINE.

It follows the neutral point of view policy.
Fair representation without bias:

The section during Corzine's tenure as Governor and Presidents Clinton and Obama is excessively overlinked.
Consideration was given to the scandal section, referencing Carla Katz. Neutral point of view and verifiability were examined and confirmed.

It is stable.
No edit wars, etc.:

Page created 5 October 2003 by Academic Challenger
Page has 2725 edits by 1219 editors
90 day page views has 30,676 views with an average of 337 views daily.
Page has had occasions of minor vandalism; Cluebot and other editors resolving quickly.
Page is considered basically stable.

It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):

File:SenatorJonCorzine.jpg = This United States Congress image is in the public domain, due being a photograph of a (former) elected official (US Senate).
File:Jon Corzine.jpg = Creative Commons Attribution 2.0 Generic license.
File:Corzine final.pdf = Creative Commons Attribution-Share Alike 3.0 Unported license.

Notifying Editors:

Page Creator Academic Challenger notified;
Editor RFD notified;
Editor Anomalocaris notified;
Editor TonyTheTiger notified;
Editor Offenbach notified;
Editor WikiProject United States governors notified;
Editor WikiProject U.S. Congress notified;
Editor WikiProject New Jersey notified;
Editor WikiProject Biography/Politics and government notified;
A total of five involved editors and several WikiProjects were notified.

Overall:

The Internet Archive bot should be run over this page and its references. Many are 404.
The lede section is too short and needs more content.
There are seven [7] citation needed tags on this page which need resolution
Material in the MF Global section is too large and needs to be trimmed; MF Global has its own page.
There is over-linking on this page. The Electoral History tables lack references.
An amount of work is required on this page.

On hold for one week. --Whiteguru (talk) 06:33, 2 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Whiteguru, I agree that the article would need significant work to maintain GA status. Suggest delisting it since it's been a week. (t · c) buidhe 07:02, 10 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Result: Delisted. Legitimate concerns, no opposition or improvements made; Matters raised in the reassessment were not addressed. These matters will remain valid until the next GA Review, whereupon they must be addressed first. --Whiteguru (talk) 20:33, 10 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]