Talk:Johnny Ronan

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Some improvements but still reads like an advertisement in some parts - particularly the last section, mainly just split it out into shorter clearer sections and deleted some unnecessary detailFinancefactz (talk) 18:10, 25 August 2020 (UTC)[reply]