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Reviewer: Sturmvogel 66 (talk · contribs) 13:59, 2 June 2022 (UTC)
I'll get to this shortly.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 13:59, 2 June 2022 (UTC)
- Images properly licensed
- In the lede, 0 is a number
- Rephrased. Zawed (talk) 04:23, 6 June 2022 (UTC)
- Tell the reader what type of ship Cape Hawk is
- Done, caught a typo in the name too. Zawed (talk) 09:59, 7 June 2022 (UTC)
- Link drop tank
- Done. Zawed (talk) 04:23, 6 June 2022 (UTC)
- Yarra shot down two more Bf 109s on 18 May, although some accounts report one of these as probably destroyed rather than being a definite aerial victory. Add a note discussing these claims in more depth
- Added some detail in a note. Zawed (talk) 10:40, 7 June 2022 (UTC)
- It only had one action for the month Awkward
- Have rephrased. Zawed (talk) 10:40, 7 June 2022 (UTC)
- Spot checks made, no issues
- Sturmvogel 66, thanks for the review, I have responded as above and with these edits. Cheers, Zawed (talk) 10:40, 7 June 2022 (UTC)