Talk:John Triscari/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Taylor Trescott (talk · contribs) 01:42, 14 December 2013 (UTC)

I will have a look at this tomorrow. Taylor Trescott - ^{my talk} + _{my edits} 01:42, 14 December 2013 (UTC)

• Should the personal section be changed to "personal life" section?
  • Y Done. Hawkeye7 (talk) 04:18, 15 December 2013 (UTC)
• Do we know where he was born?
  • No, damn it. I know where he lives, but not where he was born. I could just ask him, but that would be WP:OR. Hawkeye7 (talk) 04:18, 15 December 2013 (UTC)
• "but lost to the Canada" is the the needed here?
  • Y Deleted. Hawkeye7 (talk) 04:18, 15 December 2013 (UTC)
• The "Coach of the Year" stuff - who gives this award, and why is it noteworthy?
  • It is from the Western Australian Department of Sports and Recreation. While there are many awatfd for players, there are not so many coaches awards. Hawkeye7 (talk) 04:18, 15 December 2013 (UTC)

On hold. Taylor Trescott - ^{my talk} + _{my edits} 22:58, 14 December 2013 (UTC)

OK, looks good. Taylor Trescott - ^{my talk} + _{my edits} 15:41, 15 December 2013 (UTC)