Talk:John Thompson (American football executive)/GA1
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Reviewer: WikiOriginal-9 (talk · contribs) 03:42, 24 October 2023 (UTC)
- It is reasonably well written.
- It is factually accurate and verifiable.
- a (reference section):
b (citations to reliable sources):
c (OR):
d (copyvio and plagiarism):
- a (reference section):
- It is broad in its coverage.
- a (major aspects):
b (focused):
- a (major aspects):
- It follows the neutral point of view policy.
- Fair representation without bias:
- Fair representation without bias:
- It is stable.
- No edit wars, etc.:
- No edit wars, etc.:
- It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
- a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales):
b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales):
- Overall:
- Pass/Fail:
- Pass/Fail:
Notes
[edit]- Added an image
- added cat National Football League general managers
- don't know his high school?
Done
- Didn't see it.
- his birthdays not in that source
Done
- Added a source w/birthday.
- where'd you get he was born in WA?
Done
- I'm not sure, but as I haven't been able to find it again, I removed it.
- "serving several years as their sports information director" that source doesn't say years
Done
- Changed to "for a time".
- the body and infobox both say "Director of management council" but both sources call it "executive" director.
Done
- Changed.
- "From 1961 to 1970, Thompson served as the publicity director and assistant general manager " he wasn't assistant GM that whole time. Source says he became that later. Revise infobox also maybe
Done
- Changed.
- "for a expansion" an
Done
- Fixed.
- "and Jack Patera was named Coach of the Year" remove jack and link coach of the hear to Sporting News NFL Coach of the Year
Done
- Done.
- link Greater Seattle Chamber of Commerce
Done
- Done.
- any other post football job or personal life
Done
- Added a little bit that I could find.
- later life needs to say he died in las vegas
Done
- Added.
That's all I think. WikiOriginal-9 (talk) 06:06, 24 October 2023 (UTC)
All points have been addressed. Passing the article. Nice work! WikiOriginal-9 (talk) 16:03, 26 October 2023 (UTC)