Talk:John Harley Weston

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Please can you offer advice on this page.

http://wiki.riteme.site/wiki/User:Johnharleyweston/JohnHarleyWeston

I have prepared it in my user subpage and would like feedback on what changes need to be made before the page goes live.

Thanks

```` FURTHER NOTE FROM PAGE CREATOR- 29TH DECEMBER 2009 http://wiki.riteme.site/wiki/John_Harley_Weston

I note the banner on top of page with 'Personal appeal from Wikipedia Founder Jimmy Wales' asking clean up 'quality standards', 'citation style' and that 'major contributor has close connection to the subject'. Also note problem with external links.

I want to let you know that I am happy to do whatever is required to comply with Wiki quality standards but not sure how to 'clean up' the page to your requirements. I've clicked on help links you suggested but I'm really a beginner with Wikipedia. Being a self-managed artist I have tried to follow protocol and remain unbiased with biographical content using factual language with as many docs/links to back up text as possible.

Can you help with specifics on what needs to be reworded/deleted or added and how to properly list external links. I felt they were all necessary at the time so not sure what to do here. Should I allow the page with your comments to sit for an experienced Wikipedia user (not connected to me) to tidy up the links etc? I just don't want the page to be pulled down without you knowing that I'm happy to amend but just not sure how to satisfy the criteria. Hope you can clarify. In meantime I'll keep reading the links you suggested to help 'clean up' ThanksJohnharleyweston (talk) 08:02, 29 December 2009 (UTC)