Talk:John Alan Coey/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Hawkeye7 (talk · contribs) 11:12, 11 March 2012 (UTC)

GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria

1. Is it reasonably well written?

   A. Prose quality:

   B. MoS compliance for lead, layout, words to watch, fiction, and lists:

   One dab link: "Tracker"

2. Is it factually accurate and verifiable?

   A. References to sources:

   B. Citation of reliable sources where necessary:

   C. No original research:

3. Is it broad in its coverage?

   A. Major aspects:

   B. Focused:

   Since his claim to fame is that Coey was the first American fatality of the Rhodesian Bush War it seems that this should appear in the lead

4. Is it neutral?

   Fair representation without bias:

   Obviously a challenge in an article like this

5. Is it stable?

   No edit wars, etc:

6. Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?

   A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:

   Main image has fair use tag

   B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:

7. Overall:

   Pass or Fail:

   Okay, both issues fixed. Thanks for the review! —Cliftonian (talk) 11:17, 11 March 2012 (UTC)