Talk:Johan Hambro/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Arsenikk ^(talk) 20:15, 15 May 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Comments

The fourth paragraph in the biography section is too short to be on its own.
Is really an obituary the place to find something subjective about someone? Who isn't described as a "warm and including person" in their obituary?
The text both says he died on 27 February and 4 March. Also, did it really go three months from his death to his funeral?
'Uranienborg' is a disambig link.

Placing article on hold. Arsenikk ^(talk) 20:15, 15 May 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Thank you for the review. I think I have fixed most of these things now. As for his funeral, the only source I could find for that, was his entry in the DIS-Norge database, so I simply removed the line on his funeral. Unfortunately, they're not always having the correct dates… --Eisfbnore ^talk 07:03, 16 May 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Congratulations with a good article. Arsenikk ^(talk) 09:10, 16 May 2011 (UTC)[reply]