Talk:Joe Malone/GA1

GA Review

Unsuccessful. ~~ AirshipJungleman29 (talk) 14:33, 26 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

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Reviewer: GhostRiver (talk · contribs) 14:32, 26 January 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Hello! My name is GhostRiver, and I'll be conducting this GA review. I will assess the article against the good article criteria. Once I complete my review, you will have seven days to implement the suggested edits.

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Criteria: 1a. prose () 1b. MoS () 2a. ref layout () 2b. cites WP:RS () 2c. no WP:OR () 2d. no WP:CV ()

3a. broadness () 3b. focus () 4. neutral () 5. stable () 6a. free or tagged images () 6b. pics relevant ()

Note: this represents where the article stands relative to the Good Article criteria. Criteria marked are unassessed

Personal life

Comma after During the First World War
Comma after After his playing career
Link "heart attack" to Myocardial infarction

Playing career

1908–1917

1917–1924

Playing style

Legacy

Specify how many goals Richard scored that season
The "only player to have multiple six-goal games" stat needs a date qualifier. Source is from 2018, so probably "as of 2018"
When was he inducted into Canada's Sports Hall of Fame?
The statue pays homage to Malone's nickname, "Phantom Joe" How so?
Per MOS:LQ, ""Phantom Joe."" → ""Phantom Joe"."

Career statistics

Good

NHL records

References

There should not be two headings titled "References". Recommend naming the second one "Bibliography".
When possible, it's helpful to have a link to the Google Books entry for book references
Rather than saying "See Diamond 2002, p. 610", include a normal endnote citation there instead

General comments

No stability concerns, and as the subject has been dead for over 50 years, there are unlikely to be
Photos are either public domain or CC and are relevant to the article
Per MOS:CAPTION, unless a caption is a full sentence, there should not be a period at the end of it
Add "|upright=yes" to the last two photos

GhostRiver, as the nominator appears to be inactive, if the article does not meet the GA criteria, I would recommend failing this review. ~~ AirshipJungleman29 (talk) 17:25, 18 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

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