Talk:JoAnn E. Manson
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Feedback for further improvement
[edit]Don't let this get in the way of getting a proper peer review, but if editors are looking for ways to further improve the article:
(a) It needs more information about her birth, parentage, early life, and schooling.
(b) It needs a clearer focus on the things she's actually notable for as opposed to just listing the various titles and diplomas she's accrued over her career. Organise the achievements into groups and make it clearer what they actually mean.
(c) Fix the citations into a cleaner format using Template:Cite Book etc.
(d) Use full sentences (ie, not Journal Articles: More than 600 peer-reviewed publications in the medical literature)
If you do all that it will be a massive improvement of the article right out of the gate and will provide a bridge to more comprehensive improvement of the article. - DustFormsWords (talk) 00:51, 24 May 2010 (UTC)
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