Talk:Jiya Jale: The Stories of Songs/GA1
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Reviewer: Kavyansh.Singh (talk · contribs) 04:08, 3 January 2022 (UTC)
Nominator: Nicholas Michael Halim (talk · contribs) at 08:19, 26 August 2021 (UTC)
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[edit]- Based on my comments on Talk:In the Company of a Poet/GA1, try to fix similar issues. Will continue soon. – Kavyansh.Singh (talk) 16:48, 3 January 2022 (UTC)
Prose
[edit]She got the idea in 2016
— At the beginning of every paragraph, we'll need to specify "Kabir"the English translation
— linking "English" appears like overlinkingNasreen Munni Kabir came up with
— remove the first name.fifteen two-and-a-half-hour sessions
v.2+1⁄2
— consistency neededIn translating his songs
— should be "While translating the songs""The whole narration ... bring out the
— add {{nbsp}} after the ellipsis"For lovers of Hindi film
— avoid starting a sentence with a quotation{| class="wikitable sortable plainrowheaders"
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- This should be changed to:
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Images
[edit]- Images can take ALT text
- Images are licenced fine!
References
[edit]- Suggesting to link "Speaking Tiger Books" every time in the references
That is it. Putting on hold. – Kavyansh.Singh (talk) 03:58, 5 January 2022 (UTC)
- @Kavyansh.Singh: Done. —Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 04:12, 5 January 2022 (UTC)
- Promoting. – Kavyansh.Singh (talk) 11:40, 5 January 2022 (UTC)
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