Talk:Jim Mueller

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Review: October 26, 2023. (Reviewed version).

A news item involving Jim Mueller was featured on Wikipedia's Main Page in the In the news section on 24 August 2022.

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Reviewer: WikiOriginal-9 (talk · contribs) 05:34, 25 October 2023 (UTC)[reply]

It is reasonably well written.
a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
It is factually accurate and verifiable.
a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (No original research): d (copyvio and plagiarism):
It is broad in its coverage.
a (major aspects): b (focused):
It follows the neutral point of view policy.
Fair representation without bias:
It is stable.
No edit wars, etc.:
It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Overall:
Pass/Fail:

Notes

added florida gators, pilots, kentucky, Marine Corps reservists cats, college football announcers, radio announcers, hurricane and dolphins announcers, racing drivers cats
"He was signed by the Baltimore Colts in the National Football League (NFL) after college, but a severe ankle injury in training camp ended his playing career." I always see exagerrated stories like this. Im not sure if he actually signed.
- Hmmm... I haven't located a signing story either... what about He had a training camp stint with the Baltimore Colts of the National Football League (NFL) after college, but his playing career was ended by a severe ankle injury?
  - Changed the wording a bit - what do you think?
link nascar, ISC (International Speedway Corporation), ford, chevrolet and roger penske perhaps
- Links added.
"Throughout the mid-2000s until 2018, Mueller also did public address at other NASCAR/ISC owned tracks. " dont see this in ref 1
- I was wondering where I got that from, but then I saw it was added unsourced from this IP - as I can't verify it, I removed it.
ref 2 said he playes semi pro football in orlando
- Added.

That's all I think. WikiOriginal-9 (talk) 06:09, 25 October 2023 (UTC)[reply]

@WikiOriginal-9: BeanieFan11 (talk) 23:06, 25 October 2023 (UTC)[reply]

All points have been addressed. Passing the article. Nice work! WikiOriginal-9 (talk) 12:05, 26 October 2023 (UTC)[reply]