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Former good article nomineeJerry W. Cooper was a good articles nominee, but did not meet the good article criteria at the time. There may be suggestions below for improving the article. Once these issues have been addressed, the article can be renominated. Editors may also seek a reassessment of the decision if they believe there was a mistake.
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DateProcessResult
January 19, 2007Good article nomineeNot listed

Good MORNING/AFTERNOON/EVENING (GMT time); I have reviewed this article on 16:54, Wednesday December 25 2024 (UTC) in accordance with the Good Article (GA) criteria. I have concluded that, in my opinion, the article has failed one or more categories and is therefore denied GA status. In order to provide constructive criticism, I have below listed one or more of my reasons for failing the article, beside the relevant criteria title; this should be taken as advice for improvement, rather than a list of reasons for failing.

  1. Well-written: Close Pass
  2. Factually accurate: Pass
  3. Broad: Pass
  4. Neutrally written: Pass
  5. Stable: Pass
  6. Well-referenced: Fail
  7. Images: Close Pass

Your attention is drawn to the following points:

1. -- the prose, although acceptable, can be greatly improved; consider getting in some extra editors from the CUTF or other Cleanup WikiProject. 6. -- although the second half of the article is sufficiently cited (see WP:CITE), the remainder has almost none. This needs to be immediately addressed. 7. -- the article has one image; extra relevant images would improve the appearance of the article, split the article into more manageable sections (split by the attention-diverting image) and ergo the article is more readable.

My condolences to the lead editors - your hard work has been informally recognised; just keep it up, and do not be disheartened!

Sincerest regards,
Anthonycfc [TC] 00:34, 19 January 2007 (UTC)[reply]

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National Guard service

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Recommend adding rank and positions held (military occupational specialty or branch) if ascertained in reliable sources. Semper Fi! FieldMarine (talk) 04:34, 3 December 2023 (UTC)[reply]