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A fact from Jerry Dybzinski appeared on Wikipedia's Main Page in the Did you know column on 31 January 2008, and was viewed approximately 1,200 times (disclaimer) (check views). The text of the entry was as follows:

Did you know... that Jerry Dybzinski's baserunning error in game four of the 1983 American League Championship Series ultimately cost the Chicago White Sox both the game and the series?

A record of the entry may be seen at Wikipedia:Recent additions/2008/January.

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Passed. Rollinginhisgrave (talk) 21:54, 17 August 2024 (UTC)[reply]

The following discussion is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.

This review is transcluded from Talk:Jerry Dybzinski/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Nominator: Wizardman (talk · contribs) 00:49, 6 August 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Reviewer: Rollinginhisgrave (talk · contribs) 16:43, 17 August 2024 (UTC)[reply]

A very neat and tidy article, thanks for the opportunity to review, hope it's okay. Rollinginhisgrave (talk) 16:43, 17 August 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Prose and content

felt comfortable enough with his development that they unnecessary.
Don't love the triple repetition of "the season" in 1.5 sentences from He struggled on offense during most of the season... he played during the season, consider He struggled on offense during most of the season, however -> Despite struggling on offense,
An injury to Veryzer gave Dybzinski more playing time in the second half of the season (the this is a bit sports radio rather than Wikipedia, consider When Veryzer was injured, Dybzinski gained more playing time (the
which gave Dybzinski the inside track bit too idiomatic
wound up being the most was
and decided to retire from professional baseball retired
where he lived with his wife and three children ominous, attribute a date

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Suggestions

after a season-ending injury to Duane Kuiper -> after Duane Kuiper incurred a season-ending injury

Rollinginhisgrave (talk) 16:43, 17 August 2024 (UTC)[reply]

All issues fixed. Thanks for the review. Wizardman 21:51, 17 August 2024 (UTC)[reply]

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