Talk:Jerry Del Colliano
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External Links Question
[edit]Thanks for helping us with this page to be more up to the Wiki standards. Please let me know if the rest of the page is up to standard as I wrote it in the third person. If not could you direct me to the area that is of question so that I can make the changes ASAP. If I wanted to add an external link i.e. a link to the Philadelphia Broadcast Pioneers that showed Jerry's involvement would that be ok? Thank you for your time and attention. Also how soon will the notice come off the page once the changes have been made? Cdelcol (talk) 21:41, 18 February 2015 (UTC)
- Right now, it reads like an advertisement, so I'd first tidy up the language to look less like a resume and more like a neutral encyclopedia entry. I assume, based on your username, that you're related to this person in some form, so you may want to look at the conflict of interest information before moving much further. Thargor Orlando (talk) 22:13, 18 February 2015 (UTC)
Minor Edits Made
[edit]To make this not as an advertisement. Made it more neutral point of view. Cdelcol (talk) 21:06, 27 March 2015 (UTC)