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Did you know nomination

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The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by Bruxton talk 23:16, 21 December 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Moved to mainspace by Gonzo fan2007 (talk). Self-nominated at 19:20, 13 December 2023 (UTC). Post-promotion hook changes for this nom will be logged at Template talk:Did you know nominations/Jerry Atkinson (American football); consider watching this nomination, if it is successful, until the hook appears on the Main Page.[reply]

General: Article is new enough and long enough
Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
QPQ: Done.
Overall: QPQ done. Earwig comes up clean. Hook cited from reliable sources. Solid and interesting article! —CurryTime7-24 (talk) 00:35, 19 December 2023 (UTC)[reply]


GA Review

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The following discussion is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.


This review is transcluded from Talk:Jerry Atkinson (American football)/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Nominator: Gonzo fan2007 (talk · contribs)

Reviewer: PCN02WPS (talk · contribs) 02:51, 19 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]


I'll review this one. PCN02WPS (talk | contribs) 02:51, 19 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Career

  • "In 1949, Packers' leadership" → "Packers leadership" - don't think you need a possessive, if you leave the apostrophe, recommend adding "the" before "Packers"
  • "Atkinson, as well as a number of other Packers supporters, helped organize" → simplify wording, maybe "Atkinson and a number of other Packers supporters helped organize"
  • "funding drive with a goal of $50,000 US$50,000" → duplicated
  • "to the Packers' board of directors
  • Is there a reason that "New City Stadium" is italicized?
  • "who advocated for causes related to the Packers" → because "Packers" is repeated a lot, maybe this could be changed to "related to the team"

Personal life

  • Location of death should be included in the body and cited.

That's all I've got on prose; pretty short article and the prose that's there is well written. PCN02WPS (talk | contribs) 02:51, 19 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

PCN02WPS, I think I got everything. Thanks for the review. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 19:30, 19 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Looks good. No problems with spotchecks so happy to give this a pass. PCN02WPS (talk | contribs) 02:01, 20 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]
The discussion above is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.