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Comprehensive rewrite required

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This article is, presently, full of fluff, embellishment, praise, promotion, and unnecessary detail/trivia. A great proportion of it is unsourced/unattributed. I would greatly appreciate any assistance in trying to reign this in and bring the article up to standards. Boredintheevening (talk) 18:53, 24 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]

On my first pass through I'm going to try to address the writing style and bring the article in line with the Manual of Style. On the second pass I'll start fact checking and sorting out sourcing. It seems too much to try to do both tasks at once. Boredintheevening (talk) 19:05, 24 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]
So I think the page is in better shape now, at least in terms of being more direct and easier to read. I'm going to have a look through the German and French versions of this page and see what can be translated and imported here. Boredintheevening (talk) 15:37, 26 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]