Talk:Japanese destroyer Hatsuzakura/GA1
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Reviewer: Hog Farm (talk · contribs) 01:32, 20 September 2020 (UTC)
- Seems to me that it would make sense to include the exact date of completion in the lead
- In the lead, you have Early-blooming Cherry capitalized, in the body, you do not. Pick one or the other.
- The laid down date is different in the prose and the infobox.
- The date for when it was stricken from the Japanese navy list is different in the infobox versus the one in the prose.
- The scrapping date is different between the infobox and the main prose.
- Seems like maybe this belongs somewhere in a Soviet Navy category, but I'm not personally familiar enough with the Soviet Navy to tell exactly which one is which.
- Good idea.
Good work. Mainly just a few inconsistent dates to deal with here. Hog Farm Bacon 03:03, 20 September 2020 (UTC)
- Thanks for catching all these niggles.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 10:05, 20 September 2020 (UTC)