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Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment

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This article is or was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): Deltagolf34. Peer reviewers: Westinjg.

Above undated message substituted from Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org assignment by PrimeBOT (talk) 23:17, 17 January 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Peer Review

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Your article looks pretty good so far. The lead is written in a neutral tone, well balanced, and clearly outlines the rest of the article. However, I did notice a few things that could use improvement. The article is lacking citations in many of the claims and it would be beneficial if there were more sources added. Keep up the good work! Westinjg (talk) 03:04, 21 November 2016 (UTC)[reply]