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Did you know nomination

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The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by SL93 (talk00:22, 25 May 2021 (UTC)[reply]

5x expanded by Kosack (talk). Self-nominated at 12:05, 10 May 2021 (UTC).[reply]

  • checkY Article has been 5x expanded according to DYKcheck tool, nominated in time (5x expansion started 7 May, nominated 10 May), and article is within policy. Earwig Copyvio does say 28.1% chance of copyvio, but that is a false positive- it's only picking up names of events
  • checkY Hook is short enough, interesting, in the article, and well cited
  • ☒N QPQ not yet done
  • The article is fine but Kosack please provide a QPQ for this nomination. Will come back to pass nomination once QPQ is done. Joseph2302 (talk) 16:19, 12 May 2021 (UTC)[reply]

GA Review

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This review is transcluded from Talk:Jamie Arthur/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 07:47, 19 May 2021 (UTC)[reply]


Comments

  • Interestingly we have an article on Professional boxing which could be linked. -Done
  • although the lightweight category lacks its own article, we do have Boxing at the 2002 Commonwealth Games as a more specific link than just the games themselves.-Done
  • "to him retiring in " -> "to his retirement in".-Done
  • Could link some of these weight categories...-Done
  • "first fence against" de-fence?-Done
  • "stoppage defeat" what is that, a TKO? Link at least.
    Yes, added the link. Kosack (talk) 10:52, 26 May 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • Stance is mentioned in the infobox but nowhere else and not referenced.-Done
  • "After six weeks, his coach convinced him to take up the sport full-time" at the age of nine?? -Reworded
  • Nothing really between him being nine (~1988) and the Commonwealths (2002)?
    I've only found one or two mentions of youth tiles but the source doesn't seem particularly reliable. He appears to have been a late bloomer. Kosack (talk) 10:52, 26 May 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • "focus on his boxing career..." but he became a scaffolder? Is scaffold a universal word, perhaps needs link? -Reworded
  • Could link the Wales squad bit to Wales at the 2002 Commonwealth Games.-Done
  • "in his semi-final bout" no need for bout.-Done
  • "incase" two words.-Done
  • Referee (boxing) has an article.-Done
  • ""professional debut in March"" do we know what weight class?-Done
  • Boxing training has a link.-Done
  • "18-months" no hyphen.-Done
  • Could link winning streak-Done
  • "despite separating from trainer" any clues why?
    No explanation unfortunately, probably kept behind closed doors. Kosack (talk) 10:52, 26 May 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • "the Prizefighter series at" any more info on this?-Done
  • "opening his own gym " what happened to his first gym?
    I can't seem to find any further info on the gym, but I'd assume it was discontinued if he went on to setup a second one. Kosack (talk) 18:00, 28 May 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • what happened after Horvatic?
    Expanded slightly, he's been pretty quiet since giving up fighting. Kosack (talk) 18:00, 28 May 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • "Prizefighter quarter-final" text in table looks larger. I don't see why you need the smaller font really, the table only occupies 2/3 of my width.

That's all I have, so it's on hold for now. The Rambling Man (Stay alert! Control the virus! Save lives!!!!) 09:40, 26 May 2021 (UTC)[reply]

@The Rambling Man: Thanks for the review, I've responded as best as I can on all points. Let me know what you think. Kosack (talk) 18:00, 28 May 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Good to go. Nice work. The Rambling Man (Stay alert! Control the virus! Save lives!!!!) 21:14, 29 May 2021 (UTC)[reply]