Talk:James Crichton (soldier)/GA1

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Reviewer: Sturmvogel 66 (talk · contribs) 01:26, 31 March 2018 (UTC)[reply]

I'll get to this shortly.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 01:26, 31 March 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Images appropriately licensed.
No DABs, external links OK
He received limited schooling for by the age of 10, he was working in a coal mine Awkward, rephrase
quarter-master sergeant is the the proper spelling of this rank? Also, link it.
Link warrant officer, 2nd class and centenary.
officer training but a senior comma after training
His VC was the last to be won by a serviceman of the NZEF during the First World War.[7] Crichton's VC was the last to be won by a serviceman of the NZEF during the First World War.[7] Redundancy
He also married and with his wife would have one daughter. Awkward
If he got a service medal for the 2nd World War, then he must have served to earn it. What did he do during the war?
Do not just bold footnotes and citations, put them as proper lvl3 headers so they appear in the TOC.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 19:40, 12 April 2018 (UTC)[reply]

@Sturmvogel 66: Thanks for the feedback, I have dealt with the identified issues. That was a good catch RE the WWII service medals, I had totally overlooked that. Cheers, Zawed (talk) 03:08, 13 April 2018 (UTC)[reply]