Talk:Jagdgeschwader II

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Did you know... that the engines of Jagdgeschwader II could not tolerate artificial castor oil?

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GA Review

This review is transcluded from Talk:Jagdgeschwader II/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: Iazyges (talk · contribs) 08:18, 6 March 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Will start soon. Iazyges Consermonor Opus meum 08:18, 6 March 2018 (UTC)[reply]

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Prose Suggestions

When the war ended on 11 November 1918, the wing's personnel began to straggle home. suggest When the war ended on 11 November 1918, the wing's personnel began to return home.
- Rewritten.Georgejdorner (talk) 17:19, 9 March 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Operational history

Jagdgeschwader II (Fighter Wing II, or JG II) came into being because suggest Jagdgeschwader II (Fighter Wing II, or JG II) was created because
but were beginning to receive Fokker Dr.1 triplanes on 16 February. suggest either but were beginning to receive Fokker Dr.1 triplanes by 16 February. or else but began to receive Fokker Dr.1 triplanes on 16 February.
- Done.Georgejdorner (talk) 17:19, 9 March 2018 (UTC)[reply]
@Georgejdorner: That is all my suggestions, passing now. -- Iazyges Consermonor Opus meum 16:07, 9 March 2018 (UTC)[reply]