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This article is hard to understand, and it really needs to be copyedited to be (easily) readable.

Here are a few sentences I didn't understand:

  • Attuvassery provides lots of human resources to the society such as Nanu jyolsan, AP Ramakrishnan, etc.
    Are these names? They seem unrelated...
  • " ATTUVASSERY attuvassery is a village in kottarakkara taluk, Vettikkavala block, near Tekkumcheri and Mavadi, Attuvassery is a beautiful village has number of good sceneries like "kattakkuzhi,kalathattu etc.."
    I'm not sure if this village is directly related to Iverkala. I can't find much about Iverkala online, so maybe someone with a book about this region can help.

I would try to clean this up (I did remove some stuff), but I really don't know anything about this village, and might remove some important info. (and there is little about it online)

πr2 (tc) 23:32, 24 April 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Without references, I can't tell either what a lot of the material needs in the way of copyediting. Allens (talk | contribs) 15:55, 25 May 2012 (UTC)[reply]