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GA Review

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This review is transcluded from Talk:Iteration (album).

Reviewer: VersaceSpace (talk · contribs) 18:50, 19 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Lead and infobox

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  • If Com Truise is the common name of the musician who made the album, Seth Haley doesn't need to be mentioned
    • Seth Haley previously used other pseudonyms, and I believe it is important to cite his name to avoid confusion, because "Com Truise" is also the name of the fictional astronaut of the story. I've changed it from "Seth Haley's project Com Truise" to "Seth Haley as Com Truise". GhostP. talk 18:46, 21 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • The release date should take more priority in the lead than the storyline (though the latter can still be mentioned in the lead, the release date should go first)
  • The release date is mentioned twice in the lead, this should be changed so it is mentioned once
  • "For Iteration, Haley went to record in Burbank, California, an area with a very "open space", in order to get excited into the material he was making. The space is reflected in the sound and production of the music, which is less compressed and more simple than Haley's previous Com Truise albums" — is all this really needed in the lead??? seems more fit for its section

Concept

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  • Good

Production and composition

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  • this is well written but a lot of it is sourced by interviews and primary sources.

Tracks

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  • Good

Release and promotion

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Reception

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Track listing

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  • Good

Personnel

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  • Good

Charts

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  • Good

Use in media

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Release history

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  • Good

References

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Comments

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This is  On hold. versacespaceleave a message! 16:44, 1 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]

@VersaceSpace: Thank you for reviewing! I've made changes to the article. GhostP. talk 17:31, 1 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Ok. In that case I will  Pass this article. versacespaceleave a message! 09:50, 5 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]