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Reviewer: Sainsf (talk · contribs) 07:42, 28 June 2016 (UTC)[reply]


Will review. Sainsf (talk · contribs) 07:42, 28 June 2016 (UTC)[reply]


General
  • No copyvio/dablink/external link issues
  • Say fire-temple or fire temple
    • Done
Lead
  • What exactly is a "fire temple"?
    • Place of worship. Explained in the lead
  • Indian state of Gujarat on the west coast of India Then why say "Indian state"? (also in Location)
    • Changed
  • Don't repeat AD after first mention (also after lead in main article)
    • Corrected
  • Gujarat is linked twice
    • Delinked
  • I'm not sure if it's proper to say Mumbai, I guess it was called Bombay back then
    • Clarified
  • Keep the lead within 2 paras
    • Done
Location
  • Bold is not needed again
    • Bolding removed
  • Change the wording a bit, it resembles the lead too much
    • Done
  • The nearest Railway station No caps in "Railway"
    • Cirrected
History
  • What is "agiari"?
    • Agiari is the first level of fire temple while Atash Behram is the highest grade of fire temple
  • (created by Pindharas (nomadic robbers)) Omit the consecutive brackets "))"
    • Corrected
  • One year later, in 1742 "in 1742" is redundant
    • Corrected
Features
  • The boi ritual is enthroning "involves the enthroning of the"
    • Done
Heritage status
  • Any currency conversion for "Rs.15 million"?
    • Linked Rs. to Indian rupee. In view fluctuating exchange rate giving the figures in any other currency may not be necessary

Thanks for the changes, promoted. Sainsf (talk · contribs) 04:31, 29 June 2016 (UTC)[reply]