Talk:Ira Valentine/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: WikiOriginal-9 (talk · contribs) 16:57, 19 October 2023 (UTC)[reply]

It is reasonably well written.
a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
It is factually accurate and verifiable.
a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (No original research): d (copyvio and plagiarism):
It is broad in its coverage.
a (major aspects): b (focused):
It follows the neutral point of view policy.
Fair representation without bias:
It is stable.
No edit wars, etc.:
It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Overall:
Pass/Fail:

I changed the weight in the infobox from 210 to 212 to match PFA and PFR
"letter-of-intent" link to National Letter of Intent
- Done.
"Oilers' coach" add head coach
- Done.
"He survived the final roster cuts on September 7.[16] He made his NFL" Suggest merging these sentences to "roster cuts on September 7, and made his NFL debut"
- Done.
Anything else on his life after football?
- Added a little bit.
  - That first source said he lives in Longview. WikiOriginal-9 (talk) 07:40, 22 October 2023 (UTC)[reply]
    - @WikiOriginal-9: Does my change work (Valentine returned to East Texas, where he grew up, after his football career ended and worked at a forging plant)? BeanieFan11 (talk) 19:30, 22 October 2023 (UTC)[reply]
I added an image

All points have been addressed. Passing the article. Nice work! WikiOriginal-9 (talk) 19:38, 22 October 2023 (UTC)[reply]