Talk:Iole/GA1
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[edit]- It is reasonably well written.
- a (prose):
b (MoS):
- a (prose):
- lead should include Heracles and Iole's story in a little more detail. about she being an indirect cause of his death. her husband and son.
- put additional on lead
- violation of WP:LAYOUT: Images - text sandwiched between imgs, imgs not spread out (Reduce imgs)
- reduced images to a minimum plus spread out more
- lead should include Heracles and Iole's story in a little more detail. about she being an indirect cause of his death. her husband and son.
- It is factually accurate and verifiable.
- a (references):
b (citations to reliable sources):
c (OR):
- Good work on sourcing but avoid oversourcing. 1 ref per sentence, 1 ref for the whole para is OK, if each sentence is attributed to the same ref.
- a (references):
- reduced references to a minimum
- It is broad in its coverage.
- a (major aspects):
b (focused):
- a (major aspects):
- son Cleodaeus, siblings, mother not discussed
- added information on Cleodaeus, siblings, and mother
- the focus should be Iole, not Heracles or Deianera, their story can be curtained. Also the story of centaur Nessus.
- focused more on Iole and curtailed Heracles and Deianera and Nessus
- son Cleodaeus, siblings, mother not discussed
- It follows the neutral point of view policy.
- Fair representation without bias:
- Fair representation without bias:
- It is stable.
- No edit wars etc.:
- No edit wars etc.:
- It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
- a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales):
b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales):
- Overall:
- Pass/Fail:
- All the best improving the article.
- Pass/Fail:
- Too many quotes in Other versions section; merge as text. For (looks like wikiquote) policy, see WP:QUOTE.
- reduced quotes to a minimum
- Winning Iole in a contest covers more than what it's title says. Please rename appropriately.
- changed heading to reflect what the section is about
- Maintain consistency in spellings, 3 versions Deianera, Deianira, Deianeira are found. Just choose 1
- made one spelling
- copyedited accordingly
--Redtigerxyz (talk) 14:35, 1 September 2008 (UTC)
- replies to review. --Doug Coldwell talk 12:40, 2 September 2008 (UTC)
Plutarch
[edit]Parallel Lives of Iole and Clusia: An exact citation, please, for this figment. Septentrionalis PMAnderson 02:32, 4 September 2008 (UTC)
- Appears to be Pseudo-Plutarch. --Akhilleus (talk) 02:49, 4 September 2008 (UTC)
- Took out the Plutarch items that seem to be in dispute. --Doug Coldwell talk 11:46, 4 September 2008 (UTC)
- Not helpful. When described for what it is, not the Parallel Lives, it's a useful reference. Septentrionalis PMAnderson 15:44, 4 September 2008 (UTC)
- Took out the Plutarch items that seem to be in dispute. --Doug Coldwell talk 11:46, 4 September 2008 (UTC)