Talk:Interstate 180 (Nebraska)/GA1
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Reviewer: GhostRiver (talk · contribs) 16:18, 10 October 2021 (UTC)
I can take a look at this! — GhostRiver 16:18, 10 October 2021 (UTC)
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Infobox and lede
[edit]- "and began construction" → "and construction began" - the subject of the sentence is "It", so current sentence setup makes it look like the highway constructed itself
- Fixed.
Route description
[edit]- Good
History
[edit]- "local engineers union" → "local engineers' union"
- Fixed.
- The word "temporarily" is used three times in two sentences in the paragraph beginning "The southern section from 9th Street"
- Fixed.
- Missing letter: "1998. he project" → "1998. The project"
- Fixed.
- "nesting cliff swallow" → "nesting cliff swallows", as the source says multiple birds were found
- Fixed.
- It feels like there should be another sentence at the end to finish up this paragraph on the 2001-03 construction
- Reordered to put the project elements last as a wrap-up, and expanded with another sentence on the bird issue.
Exit list
[edit]- Good
References
[edit]- Good
General comments
[edit]- Image is relevant and properly licensed
- No stability concerns present in the revision history
- No copyvio concerns
Just a few quick prose things, plus one area of expansion. Putting on hold for now; feel free to ping me with questions or comments. — GhostRiver 16:31, 10 October 2021 (UTC)
- @GhostRiver: Thanks for the review. I believe I've addressed all of your concerns. SounderBruce 19:13, 10 October 2021 (UTC)
- Looks good now, happy to pass! — GhostRiver 19:23, 10 October 2021 (UTC)