Talk:International Hat Company/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Jaguar (talk · contribs) 16:46, 5 December 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Hi, I will be reviewing this against the GA criteria as part of a GAN sweep. I'll leave some comments soon. JAGUAR 16:46, 5 December 2016 (UTC)[reply]

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Checking against the GA criteria

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)

It is reasonably well written.
a (prose, no copyvios, spelling and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
"During World War II, International Hat developed" - World War II already linked in the lead

" Among the co-founders of International Harvest Hat was George Tilles, Sr. whose sister Hannah," - comma needed in between "Sr." and "whose"

"Founder Pellegrino, this would later prove as the height of the expansion of the company in terms of size, productivity, and financial success." - this bit needs a citation

The latte half of the first paragraph in the Products section needs at least a citation. I couldn't find "By the Gulf War, only certain personnel in the US Navy had the pressed fiber sun helmet as serviceable gear" in any source
It is factually accurate and verifiable.
a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
No original research found.
It is broad in its coverage.
a (major aspects): b (focused):
It follows the neutral point of view policy.
Fair representation without bias:
It is stable.
No edit wars, etc.:
It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Overall:
Pass/Fail:

Excellent work with this. It is well written, comprehensive, and the sources all check out. The minor concerns shouldn't interfere, so I'll pass this now. JAGUAR 22:41, 6 December 2016 (UTC)[reply]