Talk:Inspirations for James Bond/GA1
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Reviewer: GreatOrangePumpkin (talk · contribs) 12:20, 31 January 2012 (UTC)
- It is reasonably well written.
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weretaken"- Done - SchroCat (^ • @) 16:07, 9 February 2012 (UTC)
- "which came both from English spy and polymath John Dee and the breaking of a World War I German diplomatic code, and Bond's character and tastes, which came from, as Fleming himself put it "all the secret agents and commando types I met during the war", as well as Fleming himself." - shorten this sentence; maybe something like, "which came both from English spy and polymath John Dee, the breaking of a World War I German diplomatic code, Bond's character and tastes, as well as Fleming himself." I removed the clause I found redundant.
- Done - SchroCat (^ • @) 16:07, 9 February 2012 (UTC)
- Any copyright issues? What was James Bond's response?
- Not entirely sure I follow you here - could you clarify? As to Bond's response, it's referred to in the text ("a charming couple who are amused by the whole joke".[7])
- Forget this, I assume my brain did not work very well during this time...--♫GoP♫TCN 10:47, 14 February 2012 (UTC)
- Not entirely sure I follow you here - could you clarify? As to Bond's response, it's referred to in the text ("a charming couple who are amused by the whole joke".[7])
- Name of the cigarette brand? With Morland, do you mean Morland, Cumbria?
- Done - SchroCat (^ • @) 16:07, 9 February 2012 (UTC)
- "sixty cigarettes a day", "80 cigarettes a day" - use consistent style
- Done - SchroCat (^ • @) 16:07, 9 February 2012 (UTC)
- Will review the table later
- "blowing up an Italian ship single-handedly himself" I am not sure why we need "himself" at the end.
- Done - SchroCat (^ • @) 10:57, 14 February 2012 (UTC)
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- It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
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Very good! Another great work! :)--♫GoP♫TCN 11:22, 14 February 2012 (UTC)
- That's great news - many thanks indeed! - SchroCat (^ • @) 11:28, 14 February 2012 (UTC)