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I wrote a lead and several sections regarding Ime Archibong’s career in tech, as well as his advocacy for diversity and inclusion. I made the most out of the news articles and organization websites that mention his accomplishments. I hope it does his work justice! Ks1793 (talk) 03:36, 9 December 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Wiki Education assignment: Education and Social Change in the Black Diaspora

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This article was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment, between 5 September 2023 and 12 December 2023. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): Ks1793 (article contribs).

— Assignment last updated by Ks1793 (talk) 04:05, 9 December 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks @Ks1793 for creating this article. Articles about businesspeople are always difficult because they often read too much like a CV. In this case there were also too many direct quotes from interviews that weren't adding a lot of "substance" to his biography – remember this is an encyclopedia entry, not a magazine article. I have removed the quotes and have also tried to make the rest of the article less wordy. Cielquiparle (talk) 05:23, 8 January 2024 (UTC)[reply]