Talk:Ikarus IK-2/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Sturmvogel 66 (talk · contribs) 00:50, 13 January 2016 (UTC)

I'll get to this shortly.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 00:50, 13 January 2016 (UTC)

• No DABs, external link OK
• Image has appropriate fair-use rationale.
• Belgrade then in Ilić's apartment in Novi Sad they set off the subordinate phrase with commas.
• Expand and link shp and force landed
• with the hub-firing cannon Rephrase, I'm not sure that readers will follow from propeller spinner to (propeller) hub. You might want to clarify that the gun was mounted between the cylinder banks of the engine.
• while IK-1 crashed into the ground the IK-1
• and tailplane using fabric covering fabric covered
• IK-2 and Hawker Fury I biplane the Hawker... already in service with the VVKJ.
• Link staffeln
• were observed heading towards Nova Topola just as two IK-2s were returning from a patrol in the poor flying weather Clarify that they were landing when the Germans were spotted.
• Italicize the title of Grujic.
• Move the commons link to the further reading section.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 19:04, 30 January 2016 (UTC)
  • All done, Sturm. These are my edits. Thanks for the review! Regards, Peacemaker67 (click to talk to me) 07:28, 31 January 2016 (UTC)