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Good Article - on hold

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  7. Overall
    Pass/fail:
    On hold. Fix these things listed below and it may be ready.   jj137 (talk) 16:28, 18 February 2008 (UTC)

OK, here's a few things:

  • Add some references to the lead section.
I do not believe this is necessary. Everything in the lead is in the main body, and everything in the main body is referenced. If you look at other recent articles that have passed FA, you should find that they generally do not have references in the lead if the content is repeated in the main body and sourced accordingly.
  • Find at least one or two images for the article. As it says above, make sure they have appropriate copyright tags and have suitable captions.
Unfortunately, Australian copyright law means that anything not taken on Australian soil pre-1955 is not {{PD-Australia}}. None of the photos of him in the "Aussie Gold" book are pre-1955 and since it is a portrait and not of a hard to understand historic event that needs a picture to embellish it, there isn't any way it can pass FUC.
  • For the type unfamiliar with swimming, you should spell out "minutes" and "seconds" instead of putting "m" and "s". The same with yards (yd) and kilograms (kg).
Done with brackets for the first mention in the main body. After that, the short form was used.
  • "O'Brien was known for the strength that he generated ain his torso" - is that supposed to say "in his torso"?
done.
  • "while Jastremski won the first semfinal in a slower time" - that should say "semifinal in a slower time".
done.
  • The article doesn't really come to an end. The last sentence is: "In 1979, he started his own company, named Videopak, which went on toe become one of the largest privately owned television documentary companies in Australia, with its sound stages being used by public and private television companies." Is he still with that today? Add something in there about that.
Unfortunately, there is no biography on O'Brien - only a few Olympians have full length biographies, usually those who are particularly iconic and have won multiple gold medals, as swimming is really only in the news once a year for the World Championships and such, and it is not a commercially viable sport. The "Aussie Gold" book is the most comprehensive there is, covering each of the gold medalists up to 1984. There haven't been any books printed since then that has any indepth coverage at all, and none is likely, until he dies and we find an obituary in the newspaper. So in terms of public knowledge, he has basically been AWOL for 20 years.

Work on these things and I'll look over it again. Other than those things, it was pretty good.

  jj137 (talk) 16:16, 18 February 2008 (UTC)

I've addressed the problems to the extent that it seems possible. Blnguyen (bananabucket) 06:56, 19 February 2008 (UTC)
I understand what you mean when you can't find images, and the lead section doesn't really need references. With the changes you made, I think the article looks better now, and I'm passing it as a GA.   jj137 (talk) 21:23, 19 February 2008 (UTC)

Why , I like you. I am bd. Msspt (talk) 19:50, 3 March 2017 (UTC)

Successful good article nomination

I am glad to report that this article nomination for good article status has been promoted. This is how the article, as of February 19, 2008, compares against the six good article criteria:

1. Well written?: Pass
2. Factually accurate?: Pass
3. Broad in coverage?: Pass
4. Neutral point of view?: Pass
5. Article stability? Pass
6. Images?: Could use one or two, but not a priority.

If you feel that this review is in error, feel free to take it to Good article reassessment. Thank you to all of the editors who worked hard to bring it to this status, and congratulations.—   jj137 (talk) 21:27, 19 February 2008 (UTC)

finding good man and need serious relation

I wish to find my forever..and serious relation .. Lovelyjhen (talk) 21:05, 3 March 2017 (UTC)

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