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I have chopped out two lines of puffery that carried no citations and improperly credited Dunbar with ideas and tecnniques he did not "pioneer" or create.
I do not believe this article reads as an advertisement and I don't think that disclaimer should be placed on this page. Removed strongly opinionated comment, could be placed under a 'controversies' section, otherwise shows extreme bias. Took out a few loaded statements, would suggest future edits use neutral language. Tiedyejedi (talk) 16:39, 7 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]