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Reviewer: Courcelles (talk · contribs) 21:34, 9 May 2018 (UTC)
- I'm willing to take this one on tonight. Courcelles (talk) 21:34, 9 May 2018 (UTC)
- Thank you. Aoba47 (talk) 21:42, 9 May 2018 (UTC)
- "from her debut album" I know the answer, but you've written it such that whether that is Amil or Beyonce's album is ambiguous.
- Good point. I have edited this. Aoba47 (talk) 22:08, 9 May 2018 (UTC)
- The infobox image strikes me as too high-resolution for the NFCC. I've tagged it for the bot.
- I have reduced the size. Aoba47 (talk) 22:08, 9 May 2018 (UTC)
- You need to specify that Jay-Z and Shawn Carter are the same person explicitly, for those of us (waves!) who are ignorant of most pop culture things.
- Thank you for bringing this up. I am actually pretty ignorant of all of pop culture so I understand your point. Aoba47 (talk) 22:08, 9 May 2018 (UTC)
- "The video was re-uploaded to Amil's Vevo channel on October 7, 2009." Had it ever been uploaded in the first place? If not, get rid of the re in re-uploaded.
- Revised. Aoba47 (talk) 22:08, 9 May 2018 (UTC)
- Credits and personnel section is just a bulleted list of what we've already read in prose. It can go.
- From my experience, the "Credits and personnel" section is a required part of song and album articles. The information is also required to be a part of the prose. Aoba47 (talk) 22:08, 9 May 2018 (UTC)
- Silly rule, but whatever. Courcelles (talk) 22:31, 9 May 2018 (UTC)
- I was about to tell you to 86 " On a poll asking fans to choose Beyoncé's best feature, "I Got That" received the least amount of votes" but then I noted it was from Billboard. Specify who ran the poll (or get rid of it, I don't care which)
- Added the Billboard context. Aoba47 (talk) 22:08, 9 May 2018 (UTC)
- Otherwise looks good to me. Courcelles (talk) 21:46, 9 May 2018 (UTC)
- Thank you for the review. I believe that I have addressed everything. Have a wonderful rest of your day and/or night. Aoba47 (talk) 22:08, 9 May 2018 (UTC)
- I'm havign a very good evening, thank you. Promoting. Courcelles (talk) 22:31, 9 May 2018 (UTC)