Talk:I Don't Wanna Be in Love (Keyshia Cole song)/GA1
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Reviewer: K. Peake (talk · contribs) 06:37, 17 April 2022 (UTC)
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You have two articles pending, therefore it is only right that I take one on! --K. Peake 06:37, 17 April 2022 (UTC)
Infobox and lead
[edit]- Remove ref from the infobox since the genre is sourced in the body
- Make the writing/production sentence the second of the lead instead
- Remove independent record label introduction because that being solely in the body is sufficient
- "during Cole and Ashanti's appearances" → "during her and Ashanti's joint appearance" to stop it from sounding like they appeared separately
- "Greg Edwards and Ron Fair." → "Greg Edwards, and Ron Fair."
- "A brokenhearted ballad, its lyrics revolve" → "A R&B ballad, "I Don't Wanna Be in Love" revolves" with the pipes
- "by music critics who complimented its lyrics and instrumental." → "by music critics, who complimented its lyrics and instrumentation." with the pipe
- "on the US R&B/Hip-Hop Airplay," → "on the Billboard R&B/Hip-Hop Airplay chart," with the pipe
- "number eleven on the" → "number 11 on the" per MOS:NUM
- Add a sentence mentioning the audio visualizer after the above one
Background and release
[edit]- "almost three years after the release of her seventh studio album," → "around three years after the release of her seventh studio album"
- "on her eighth studio album." → "on her eighth album." to avoid overusage of studio album
- "The song was played as part of the" → "The song was debuted during the"
- "on January 21, 2020." → "on January 21, 2021."
- "along with the release date as" → "along with the release date of"
- "and black sneakers along with" → "and black sneakers, along with"
- "in the corner of the cover hanging above her symbolizing" → "in the corner dangling above her, symbolizing" to avoid overusage of hang terms
- "The song was the first release under" → "The song was released for digital download and streaming as the first single under" with the pipes, also add the ref for various releases here
- Pipe urban contemporary to Urban contemporary music
Composition and lyrics
[edit]- ""I Don't Wanna Be in Love" is" → "Musically, "I Don't Wanna Be in Love" is"
- Pipe ballad to Sentimental ballad
- Also mention the piano, bass and synths under instrumentation per Soul Bounce
- Mention the ad-libs and high notes from Cole per Hip Hop Weekly in a sentence after the above one
- "written by Cole herself and Brian Bates with production" → "written by Cole and Brian Bates, with production"
- "Greg Edwards and Ron Fair." → "Greg Edwards, and Fair." plus cite the Tidal credits instead of [12][19] here
- "The song is about Cole" → "It is about Cole"
- "a friends with benefits relationship with" → "a friends with benefits relationship, with"
- "wanna hurt her," confronting" → "wanna hurt her", confronting"
- "felt that the lyrics were" → "felt that the lyrics are"
Reception
[edit]- Remove excess speech mark after the song's title
- "received generally positive reviews from music critics." → "was met with generally positive reviews from music critics." with the pipe
- Use different terminology than "of" at points to be less repetitive for reviewer introductions
- "described the song as a" → "called "I Don't Wanna Be in Love" a" to be less repetitive
- Revolt should not be italicised
- "while Rap-Up found it" → "whereas the staff of Rap-Up found the song to be"
- Pipe Rap Radar to Elliot Wilson (journalist)
- "she was "afraid" → "she is "afraid"
- "it entered US" → "The song entered the US" per no traction being directly sourced
- "a total of eleven weeks" → "a total of 11 weeks" per MOS:NUM
Track listing
[edit]- Good
Credits and personnel
[edit]- Use
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so there is the right space between credits and personnel
Charts
[edit]Weekly charts
[edit]- See MOS:TABLECAPTION
Year-end charts
[edit]- See MOS:TABLECAPTION
- Wikilink Adult R&B Songs
Release history
[edit]- See MOS:TABLECAPTION
- Format → Format(s)
- Label → Label(s)
- Digital download and streaming need various Apple citations to back this up
- Pipe Urban contemporary radio to Urban contemporary music
References
[edit]- Copyvio score looks solid at 24.8%!!!
- Cite Atlanta Black Star as work/website instead on ref 2
- Author-link Verzuz on ref 3 and fix MOS:CAPS issues
- Remove the publisher from ref 4 and cite last name followed by first/middle for consistency
- Cite Billboard as work/website instead on ref 6 and pipe to Billboard (magazine)
- Fix MOS:CAPS issues with ref 7
- Author-link Keyshia Cole on ref 9
- Cite SOHH as publisher instead on ref 10
- Remove ref 13 because it is an actual duplicate of ref 12 and only one source is needed for the first release claim anyway
- keyshiacole → Vevo on ref 14, with the wikilink
- Ref 15 should be laid out the same as the others with the archive, adding a title, access-date and publisher of BDSRadio (pipe to Broadcast Data Systems]]
- Cite Apple Music as publisher instead on ref 17 and add various citations from the platform, placing countries in brackets instead of using the location parameter, i.e. (US)
- WP:OVERLINK of Rated R&B on ref 19
- Cite Revolt as publisher instead on ref 20
- Pipe Rap Radar to Elliot Wilson (journalist) on ref 23
Final comments and verdict
[edit]On hold until all of the issues are fixed! --K. Peake 08:07, 17 April 2022 (UTC)
@Kyle Peake:, per your directions, I have now fixed the issues. I hope that everything looks fine now. Fullmoon211 (talk) 03:55, 19 April 2022 (UTC)
- Fullmoon211 This looks mostly good and I did some copy editing, but you still need to change the second usage of "described the song as a" in the reception section's first sentence per my instructions, author-link Keyshia Cole on her tweet ref and cite SOHH as publisher instead. --K. Peake 07:06, 19 April 2022 (UTC)
Done. Fullmoon211 (talk) 13:24, 19 April 2022 (UTC)
- ✓ Pass now, good job on implementing everything! --K. Peake 06:54, 20 April 2022 (UTC)