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Reviewer: 12george1 (talk · contribs) 20:09, 19 October 2011 (UTC)[reply]

  • "After peaking as a Category 4 hurricane on the Saffir-Simpson Hurricane Scale early on October 19." - Sentence fragment; I would suggest rewording that to: "Early on October 19, Tico peaked as a Category 4 hurricane on the Saffir-Simpson Hurricane Scale".
  • "Though, most of it's impact occurred in Mexico" - Change it's to its
  • "14 miles (22 kilometres) in diameter," - Why isn't kilometres abbreviated?
  • "Two 328 ft (100 m) anchored ships were washed aground by strong waves and swells.[11] with a total of seven ships reported missing." - Switch that period to a comma.
  • "although mos tof the agricultural damage" --> "although most of the agricultural damage"
  • "more evacuations to sheleters were anticipated." - typo
  • To remain consistent with other references, switch "Roth, David" to "David Roth" in reference #2. However, I wouldn't touch reference #8 since it is with the "Most intense landfalling Pacific hurricanes" template.
  • On reference #3, one of the authors is "Ethan J. Gibney1"; there shouldn't be a 1 on the end of his last name.
Ok i went through and made your proposed changes. I could not find the Ethan Gibney 1 either.Millertime246 (talk) 21:04, 19 October 2011 (UTC)[reply]
oh, looks like you beet me to it. Good workMillertime246 (talk) 21:04, 19 October 2011 (UTC)[reply]
Ref 3 is with the ""Most intense landfalling Pacific hurricane" template. YE Pacific Hurricane 23:32, 19 October 2011 (UTC)[reply]