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Reviewer: Hurricanehink (talk · contribs) 04:57, 10 December 2013 (UTC)[reply]

  • You should link to Atlantic hurricane in the opening sentence. And speaking of, what about George in 1950-2? Mike in 1950? Charlie?
    • Linked, and clarified that it was the first after the discontinuation of Phonetic alphabet names. TheAustinMan(Talk·Works)
  • "and areas further inland " - distance means this should be "farther"
  • "and was the third tropical cyclone to form during the annual hurricane season" - the template at the bottom of the article doesn't agree with this
  • "and not atypical of a minimal hurricane" - why not just say "and typical of..."?
  • "for the death of one person" --> "for one death"
  • Just saying, the July 1959 gulf hurricane does have an article
  • "These warnings were upgraded to hurricane warnings upon Bob's strengthening to such and intensity" - eh?
  • I'm confused in the tornado section where these occurred
  • Any more Indiana impact?

Generally good article, just a few comments and such. --♫ Hurricanehink (talk) 04:57, 10 December 2013 (UTC)[reply]