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  1. Does not fulfill WP:lead criteria.
  2. Subsection on diseases is much too short and doesn't link to stuff like fractures. Doesn't present diseases in any fixed structure. Maybe a table would help...
  3. Nothing on history and culture
  4. Nothing on trauma and doesn't mention orthopedics.
  5. Only list two disorders under those that are common... A common section should be combined into the disease section.
  6. It states there are 206 bones with no reference. Are there always 206 bones? What about sesamoid bones and extra bones. It is not a fixed number. See List of bones of the human skeleton
  7. Sparely referenced. Referencing formatting is also not consistent or adequate. Doesn't give the ISBN or the edition of the Merck Manuel.

--Doc James (talk · contribs · email) 05:25, 14 January 2009 (UTC)[reply]