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Reviewer: Rp0211 (talk2me) 03:49, 27 June 2011 (UTC)[reply]


UPDATED REVIEW
I am going to give you a chance to fix the mistakes presented and/or defend the ones you believe don't affect good article nomination. - Rp0211 (talk2me) 01:38, 29 June 2011 (UTC)[reply]

This user has refused to fix these changes, therefore the article fails at good article nomination at this time. Rp0211 (talk2me) 05:39, 30 June 2011 (UTC)[reply]
  1. Is it reasonably well written?
    A. Prose quality:
    B. MoS compliance for lead, layout, words to watch, fiction, and lists:
  2. Is it factually accurate and verifiable?
    A. References to sources:
    B. Citation of reliable sources where necessary:
    C. No original research:
  3. Is it broad in its coverage?
    A. Major aspects:
    B. Focused:
  4. Is it neutral?
    Fair representation without bias:
  5. Is it stable?
    No edit wars, etc:
  6. Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
    A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:
    B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:
  7. Overall:
    Pass or Fail:


Background

  • This section seems fine; needs "Record and getting signed" and "Artwork" as subsections

Record and getting signed

  • The "Record and getting signed" section should be a subsection in the "Background" section

Singles

  • The released date of the singles should be stated separately for each individual single
  • Discuss each single and everything about it (music video, release date, chart history) in separate, individual paragraphs
  • Difficult to follow at times because of disorganization of details
  • "Four of the album's singles appeared on the UK Singles Chart..." - Specify which singles
  • "...where it peaked inside the Top 80." - Specify what number it was on the chart
  • "The video for "Blessed Night" was shot from inside a 1976 Buick LeSabre Custom Coupe." - No reference

Artwork

  • Should be a subsection in "Background" section

Promotion, release and reception

  • "They played Camden Crawl and the NME New Music Tour." - Doesn't make sense
  • "Niall O'Keeffe noted its depth and range..." - Specify who Niall O' Keeffe is
  • "Chris Waugh admired Joel's guitar playing..." - Specify who Chris Waugh is
  • "Richard Hughes drew comparisons..." - Specify who Richard Hughes is
  • "Less favourable reviews came from David Renshaw..." - Specify who David Renshaw is
  • "Tim DiGravina wrote that..." - Specify who Tim DiGravina is
  • "Emily Mackay compared the band..." - Specify who Emily Mackay is

Track listing

  • You need to write whoever writes each song in the track list. Here is a basis to guide off of:
- Write the full name of the person on the first song. If they have written another song, just put their last name on each song they write.
  • There is no reference to source ALL of the information in this section

Personnel

  • There is no working reference to support the information in this section; please find another source

Release history, charts, accolades

  • Each section should be a subsection, not bold-faced
  • No references for singles chart information

References

  • Most of the references seem OK, but others are either inactive or do not cite the information given in the sections