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GA Review

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Reviewer: Candyo32 - Merry CHRISTmas :) 19:32, 27 December 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Lead & infobox

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  • Record label is a pretty common term in a music article, so it doesn't need to be linked
 Done
  • Say that it also reached the top ten in Sweden, Norway, and United Kingdom, and the top twenty in the Netherlands, New Zealand and Switzerland.
 Done
 Done
  • "in the categories of "Best Female Video" and "Best New Artist in a Video", and won in the category of "Best Female Video"." ---> in the categories of "Best Female Video" and "Bets New Artist in a Video," winning the previous category.
 Done
  • Use of synths does not make a song synthpop.
 Done

Background

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  • remove "she said" and just merge into one quote.
 Done
  • "that they relinquish" Sounds weird.. should it be that they would relinquish" ?
Corrected it to that they should relinquish.
  • Aretha album needs to be italicized.
 Done
  • Lots of instances where she is referred to as "Whitney." Make it non personal and state "the singer" or "Houston."
 Done

Composition

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  • It says and is linked to dance here but in the infobox it is dance-pop. Which one?
Dance-pop.  Done
  • I question the reliability of Pandora, which I left on your talk.
Removed Pandora references.  Done

Critical reception

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  • I don't see the purpose of putting some words in the [ ] brackets. If the writer made a mistake or something use the [sic] temp.
 Done

Chart performance

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  • On the issue date --> On the issue dated
 Done

Everything else unnoted is good! Candyo32 - Merry CHRISTmas :) 19:32, 27 December 2010 (UTC)[reply]