Talk:Hosi Vasunia

Hosi Vasunia was nominated as a Media and drama good article, but it did not meet the good article criteria at the time (January 5, 2024, reviewed version). There are suggestions on the review page for improving the article. If you can improve it, please do; it may then be renominated.

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Response to first reviewer

Thank you for your comments. John Snowball 007 (talk) 12:21, 27 September 2022 (UTC)[reply]

GA Review

This review is transcluded from Talk:Hosi Vasunia/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: Pretzelles (talk · contribs) 16:41, 6 December 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Hi, I'm going to be reviewing this article under the Good article criteria and see if we can get it up to standards. While it's probably quite close to being a quick-fail right now, it's my first review and I'm going to give the opportunity for it to be cleaned up first.

As such, the main issues identified right now are:

A couple of unreferenced sections, to which I've added "citation needed" tags.
His death date is mentioned in the lead and infobox, but it's not referenced or mentioned in the body of the text.
Unneeded sentences, like the following:

Vasunia's first line in that play was "Chicken, top chicken!"

Some quotes are included in the article but placed in () instead of being properly written into the body of the article, like '("excellently portrayed")'.
The stage section would be better viewed as tables instead of lists, as per WP:FILMOGRAPHY.
His impact on Indian theatre is mentioned briefly throughout, but the article would benefit from a "Legacy" section to probably establish his importance to the industry.
The article could be better broken into subsections, covering different eras of his career and making it easier to follow.

I think that's enough to work on for now, let me know when some of those have been resolved and if you have more questions, then we can work on it some more! Pretzelles (talk) 16:41, 6 December 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Thank you for your comments. I will try to clean it up along the lines that you suggest. John Snowball 007 (talk) 22:29, 9 December 2023 (UTC)[reply]

@Qiw007: Hey, I hope things are going well irl. I think I'm going to have to push this article towards failing the Good article criteria at this exact moment. It still needs a fair bit of work relating to those points above (as well as some others), but it's not been worked on for over 3 weeks now and I think that's enough time to move it forwards. You can find me on my talk page if you want some future advice on it, and I should be happy to help! Thanks, Pretzelles (talk) 20:43, 5 January 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Okay, I understand. Thanks for your kinds words and the encouragement. John Snowball 007 (talk) 14:12, 10 January 2024 (UTC)[reply]