Talk:Horace Moore-Jones

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Review: September 13, 2019. (Reviewed version).

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GA Review[edit]

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Reviewer: CPA-5 (talk · contribs) 20:18, 8 September 2019 (UTC)[reply]

I claim this one. After I finish USS Takanis Bay and German torpedo boat T35 I will do this one. Probably within a couple of days I will start this one. Cheers. CPA-5 (talk) 20:18, 8 September 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Born in Malvern Wells, Worcestershire, England Link Worcestershire.

Done. Zawed (talk) 09:17, 12 September 2019 (UTC)[reply]

and a school teacher, Sarah Ann Garner No née?

Done. Zawed (talk) 09:17, 12 September 2019 (UTC)[reply]

a relationship with Dobson and the two married Dobson who?

It was Anne Dobson introduced in the previous paragraph. I have moved the content around to make the connection stronger. Zawed (talk) 09:17, 12 September 2019 (UTC)[reply]

careers as artists, settling in Sydney Unlink Sydney.
Dobson, who had trained for a time at the Royal Academy in London Unlink London.
with the Art Society of New South Wales Link New South Wales.

Done. Zawed (talk) 09:17, 12 September 2019 (UTC)[reply]

remarried in 1905, to Florence Mitchell No néé?

Done. Zawed (talk) 09:17, 12 September 2019 (UTC)[reply]

time of the outbreak of the First World War Link WWI.

Done. Zawed (talk) 09:17, 12 September 2019 (UTC)[reply]

he joined up with the main body of the NZEF in Egypt Pipe Egypt to the Sultanate of Egypt.
upon on the plateau where Lieutenant Colonel Arthur Plugge established Lieutenant Colonel needs a hyphen.

Done. Zawed (talk) 09:17, 12 September 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Section, which was attached to Lieutenant General William Birdwood's Same as above with Lieutenant General.

Done. Zawed (talk) 09:17, 12 September 2019 (UTC)[reply]

at Gallipoli, as well as Major General Alexander Godley Same as above with Major General.

Done. Zawed (talk) 09:17, 12 September 2019 (UTC)[reply]

the five-metre high statue, mounted No English units?

Added a conversion and rephrased slightly. Zawed (talk) 09:17, 12 September 2019 (UTC)[reply]

donated by the Turkish government and sourced --> "donated by the Turkish Government and sourced".

Done. Zawed (talk) 09:17, 12 September 2019 (UTC)[reply]

No edit wars.

Infobox

Looks good to me.

Sources

The "Bronze statue honours war artist" says it was published on 27 March 2015 instead of 28th.

Done. Zawed (talk) 09:17, 12 September 2019 (UTC)[reply]

The rest looks good to me.
No ORs.
The sources are reliable of high quality.

Images

Looks good to me. Cheers. CPA-5 (talk) 12:37, 11 September 2019 (UTC)[reply]
CPA-5 Thanks for the review. I have actioned all of the above, except some country/city links. It is my preference to not link countries but to link cities. This is s a consequence of feedback of reviewers on past articles I have taken to GA/A-Class. Zawed (talk) 09:17, 12 September 2019 (UTC)[reply]

I agree you. I only believe you should link a country if it's not a current one but a former one. Cheers. CPA-5 (talk) 20:55, 12 September 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Anyway I'll pass it. Cheers. CPA-5 (talk) 09:59, 13 September 2019 (UTC)[reply]